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* "working out or training, or spending time with a dog" – double "or" so rephrase
* Remove the comma after "supporting roles in the MCU films".
* Remove the comma after "some welcome backstory" (see [https://www.rottentomatoes.com/tv/wandavision/s01/e04 RT consensus]).
* Remove the commas after "fan theories about the series" and "Park and Dennings".
* There are a few more reviews at RT. Try adding them with [[WP:RECEPTION]].
* Mark references from ''The New York Times'' with "|url-access=limited".
* Mark references from ''Vulture'' with "|url-access=limited".
* ''The Wrap'' {{right arrow}} ''TheWrap'' (for consistency throughout [[TheWrap|Wikipedia]])
* Be consistent with ''Comicbook.com'' or ''ComicBook.com''.
* Be consistent with ''Art of VFX'' or ''The Art of VFX''.
* Wikilink [[Dave Itzkoff]], [[Justin Warner]]. and [[Megan McDonnell]] in the citations they are credited in.
* Ping when done. [[User:Some Dude From North Carolina|Some Dude From North Carolina]] ([[User talk:Some Dude From North Carolina|talk]]) 16:16, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
**{{ping|Some Dude From North Carolina}} I've addressed all of these outside the additional reviews, since the hope was to try and be consistent across all the episode articles with the publications presented in the reviews section. I'm not seeing too many others to add in, and will see if {{u|Adamstom.97}} or others have any thoughts regarding this. - [[User:Favre1fan93|Favre1fan93]] ([[User talk:Favre1fan93|talk]]) 16:34, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
***I have added a couple small bits and done a re-arrange. {{ping|Some Dude From North Carolina}} we now have all the RT "Top Critics" for the episode and what I think is a good spread of other reviews, plus a more logical grouping for the paragraphs. - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 21:27, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
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