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'''Dragons''' are an intelligent race that inhabit [[Alagaësia]], a fictional [[fantasy (genre)|fantasy world]] created by [[Christopher Paolini]]. They are a key part of the ''[[Inheritance Trilogy]]'', in which dragons are a nearly extinct and magical race.

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== Overview ==

Dragons have lived in [[Alagaësia]] since ancient times with the [[Alagaësia#Dwarves|Dwarves]]. The skin of a Dragon is nearly impenetrable, though the thin membrane of the wings can be easily pierced. Their scales glitter like gems, although each Dragon only has one scale color. They also have the same eye color as their scales, and their teeth and neck spikes are bone white. The Dragons breath flame the color of their scales, and some can impressively hold the flame for over an hour. The older the dragon grows, the longer they can hold the flame. They never stop growing until their death.

[[Image:Eragon_Saphira_Poster.jpg|250px|thumb|300px|Saphira, the dragon protagonist of the series, as shown in the [[Eragon (film)|film version]] of ''Eragon''.]]

Since the Dragons are bound to Alagaësia, they possess magical properties. Strange things seem to happen around Dragons - people live longer, the earth changes, and things of that nature, yet no one knows how it happens. It is possible these things happen because the Dragon's magic, which permeates every inch of their body. They cannot willingly use their magic, except for their fire. However, when using magic, their strength is unparalleled.

== History ==

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Before the formation of the Dragon Riders, a young elf hunted and killed a dragon like it was a common animal. The Dragons banded together and furiously attacked the Elves, leading into war.

Five years into the war, an Elf called [[Eragon I|Eragon]] found a white Dragon egg and raised the hatchling within, naming him Bid'Daum ; it was they who stopped the war, allowing peace to follow. In order to prevent another war, the Dragons connected their souls with the Elves, changing both races. Dragons gained the use of language and other trappings of civilization, as well as becoming less fierce. Since Humans came afterwards, the Human Riders were never affected by the Dragons as greatly as the Elves were.

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== As mounts for Dragon Riders ==

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The few Humans and Elves who ride Dragons like the Elf [[Eragon I]] are aptly called [[Dragon Riders]]. Dragons give their Riders "shining palms," a silver mark, or the "[[gedwey ignasia]]" as a result of the first physical contact between rider and dragon. Dragons communicate telepathically with their Riders, and house incredible magic that can combine with that of the Rider. Dragons are immortal and can also allow their Riders to be nearly immortal; old age will seldom kill them, although wounds or poison can. Over time the link between the dragon and rider will change the rider's appearance.

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== Last 7 Days ==

'''Glaedr''' (Pronounced Glay-Dur) is a male golden [[Dragon (Inheritance)|dragon]] in [[Christopher Paolini]]'s ''[[Inheritance (trilogy)|Inheritance Trilogy]]''. He first appears in ''[[Eldest]]'', the second book of the trilogy. His [[Dragon Riders|Rider]] is [[Oromis]], who also is called ''Osthato Chetowä''—"The Mourning Sage" and ''Togira Ikonoka'' - "The Cripple Who Is Whole."

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=== November 19 ===

*[[Vanagon]]: "this is terribly messy, and disorganized, i know, but i would appreciate anyone editing in any missing or incorrect info. thank you." Maybe we should just salvage what we can and redirect to [[VW Type 2]] which has an extensive section on this model already. --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]]

* [[Theory of conduct]] This was probably listed before but i came across it randomly...it is big and scary and needs alot of cleanup! -[[User:Mkrupnic|Mkrupnic]] 21:04, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

* [[CEM integration]] This makes no sense to me. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 21:01, Nov 19, 2004 (UTC)

* [[EarthSave]] Is this encyclopedia-worthy? Looks like an ad for a company. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 20:56, Nov 19, 2004 (UTC)

** You can say it's along the lines of [http://www.thehungersite.com The Hunger Site], but it does look like a non-profit org to me. - [[User:Mailer diablo|Mailer diablo]] 22:22, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

* [[Polymorphism in object-oriented programming]] &mdash; two article parts not yet melded together, plus comment ''"Lots more to be said here, including generics..."'' [[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]

*[[Mano River Union]] - substub hell on important topic

*[[Twiztid]] - extremely chatty. Copyright vio? [[User:Danny|Danny]]

**Thank god. It's a copyvio. Saves me having to spend my valuable time editing that crap. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 16:36, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Washim]] - needs context badly. Also needs expansion (substub to stub, at least). [[User:Neutrality|[[User:Neutrality|<b>Neutrality</b>]] ([[User talk:Neutrality|hopefully!]])]]

*[[David McCullough]] Text dump. Possible copyvio? Definitely a notable historian who needs a good article. [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]]

**Seems it's a cut-and-paste from several sources, at times badly melded together. Should we list it as a copyvio? -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 06:32, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Modern Antiques]] - orphan, chatty, wikify etc - maybe merge into another article --[[User:JTN|JTN]]

**Did a 100% re-write. Is it worth keeping though? Not sure how much this term is used. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 08:47, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Rap Nigerien]] - wikify and general coherence. --[[User:DMG413|DMG413]]

**Interesting... [[Rap nigerien]] (small n) was listed just two days ago! Do we need a '''merge'''? [[User:Grutness|Grutness]] 06:15, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[DPPX]] -- [[User:Sarge Baldy|Sarge Baldy]] 06:24, Nov 19, 2004 (UTC)

**Rewritten. Check for any minor mistakes I made. :) - [[User:Mailer diablo|Mailer diablo]] 22:15, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Bored of Studies]]. Poor little orphan needs a good home. There's also the page [[Bored of studies]], which I put a merge message on. [[User:Grutness|Grutness]] 07:37, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[List of corset periods]] - was merged with a number of articles after [[Wikipedia:Votes for deletion/List of corset periods|listing on VfD]]. Needs serious cleanup, and also probably a different name. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 13:18, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Chakra]] - the introduction sounds a little bit strange, may be biased in favour of the existence of chakras, and doesn't seem to adequately represent the diversity of the traditions mentioned later in the article. The section on modern New Age notions is also strange with its many slashes, and may even be nonsense (I haven't put up any mental effort to determine this). [[User:Arj|arj]] 14:16, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Glaedr is the oldest dragon in the trilogy, senior even to Galbatorix's black dragon [[Shruikan]]. He is three times larger than Saphira, the [[Eragon|main character's]] dragon. Like his Rider, Glaedr is disabled——his left foreleg is nothing but a white stump in place. Glaedr and Oromis live in Du Weldenvarden, a forest in the north of [[Alagaesia]], the world in which the trilogy takes place. The two hid during [[The Fall (Inheritance)|The Fall]] when the dragon riders and dragons were being killed by a rebellious rider named [[Galbatorix]], for if Glaedr and Oromis had died before one of the remaining dragon eggs had hatched, then there would be no one left to pass on the secrets to the new Rider.

=== November 18 ===

*[[Bill of Materials]] - needs a lot more text to make it non-obvious. [[User:JesseW|JesseW]] 14:25, 18 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Mediaeval India]] - Looks like it starts in the middle of an article. - [[User:UtherSRG|UtherSRG]] 13:45, 18 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Syntactic methods]] - utterly baffling and suspected of being a non-web copyvio. See also [http://scant.org/ref/vvcostbenefit.html] [[User:Gazpacho|Gazpacho]] 12:45, 18 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Riverside International Raceway]] - unwikified, sloppy, badly written, unencyclopedic, slightly POV --[[User:Szyslak|Szyslak]]

:Done, still needs fact-cheking (especially contrasting dates in table and lead, which were both in the original article). [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 11:25, Nov 19, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Private candidates]] - as a non-UKan, this article means absolutely nothing to me. I have no idea what it's saying, and the abbreviations have no meaning and there are no links to explanatory pages. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 01:12, Nov 18, 2004 (UTC)

**Rewritten with context, links, etc. and moved to [[Private candidate]] --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]] 21:48, 18 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Panelology]] - unwikified, leaves a hole to be filled in. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 01:04, Nov 18, 2004 (UTC)

* [[Abner Orick]] -- - PoV, chronologize, find out what "and 1997" means, since he lost that year. But consider just '''VfD'''ing.

Oromis and Glaedr tutored the young riders [[Morzan]] and [[Brom (Inheritance)|Brom]].

* [[Mairinque]] -- a city in Brazil. Looks like some struggling translation and maybe some cut-and-paste.

* [[Sexology]] -- article that's been mostly a skeleton with some lists for a long time. Now trying to turn it into prose in normal article form. -- Anon.

===November 17=Role==

In ''[[Eldest]]'', Glaedr becomes [[Saphira]]'s teacher and the object of her affections. Oromis trains Saphira's Rider, [[Eragon (character)|Eragon]]. [[Saphira]] thinks that Glaedr will be her mate, but he rejects her. In this, Glaedr and Saphira have a fight which Saphira starts by scratching Glaedr in the right forleg. Glaedr respondes by biting Saphira in the thigh. Glaedr believes that the young female is meant for one of the unhatched dragon eggs. Later, on [[Eragon]]'s advice, Saphira apologizes to Glaedr.

*[[Billie Sol Estes]] -- Very narrow account focusing exclusively on mysterious deaths...possible regurgitation from conspiracy theorist? [[User:Ellsworth|Ellsworth]] 21:24, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Mary the elephant]] -- Not very grammatical, article starts with its death? [[User:Ashibaka|Ashibaka]] [[User talk:Ashibaka|tlk]] 20:34, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

:Did some work, found website info that needs including. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 11:11, Nov 18, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Portuguese 1807 Fleet]] -- An unwikified, unformatted mess. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 17:56, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

**formatted, but needs context if it's to be at all useful. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 06:33, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

***Looks so much better. I am flagging as needing attention and will post to attention list. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 18:40, Nov 19, 2004 (UTC)

*Syracuse on the [[Wikipedia:Requests for expansion]] list (from last November) links to the disambiguation page, rather than the town itself. [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] 17:10, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[South African Art Music]] - Text dump that looks like a copyvio, but doesn't appear to be. Needs wikification, and probably alot more. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 17:00, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*The links to the lists of items to be expanded seems to have disappeared off the main community portal pages.

* [[Trusted Email Open Standard]] -- substub, points to a dead website. Is this still a live topic, and is it even of historical interest? -- [[User:Karada|Karada]] 14:22, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

* [[Scotism]] -- my own import from the public ___domain ''Catholic Encyclopedia'' text, needs heavy editing for POV and style. -- [[User:Karada|Karada]] 16:36, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Satellite Internet]] -- I've had a good go at cleaning this up, but more is needed. -- [[User:Karada|Karada]] 19:46, 17 Nov 2004 (UTc) +Additional cleanup done - if you cannot find an issue here, remove the cleanup notice and remove title from this list. [[User:Denni|Denni]][[User_talk:Denni|<font color=#228822>&#9775;</font>]] 21:22, 2004 Nov 18 (UTC)

== Role in the Inheritance Trilogy ==

===November 16===

In the events of the ''[[Inheritance Trilogy]]'', there are Dragons on each side of the war - [[Galbatorix]] houses one green unhatched Dragon egg and his own Dragon, [[Shruikan]]; under Galbatorix's control is [[Murtagh]] and his dragon [[Thorn (Inheritance)|Thorn]]. Fighting against Galbatorix for the [[Varden]] is [[Eragon (character)|Eragon]] and his dragon [[Saphira]], the last female dragon. Another Dragon is [[Glaedr]], who is the Dragon of [[Oromis]], the oldest remaining Rider, who is an Elf.

*[[Rap nigerien]] - unwikified mess without context. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 13:00, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Teddy Ruxpin]] - needs info on the cartoon next to the toy, maybe an image. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 13:00, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Mondlango]] - chatty intro, sparse information.

:Also lots of small paragraphs with own heading. Needs to have similar layout as other language articles. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 11:06, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

:How does Monnlango differ from [[Esperanto]]?

*[[Te Puea Herangi]] - one paragraph of unwikified textdump. Needs TLC. [[User:Grutness|Grutness]]

*[[Atheist Jew]] - wikification. grammar. Redirect to [[atheism]] or [[Judaism]]??

**rewriten, but still sounds strange. does anybody know if this is a recorded phenom? [[User:humblefool|Humble Fool]]

*[[Rejected]] - Huh? [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 00:49, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

**I've done a major rewrite; see if you agree that it's better. I'm removing the cleanup notice on the presumption that it is. -- [[User:Antaeus Feldspar|Antaeus Feldspar]] 07:46, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

***Much better, though the storyline doesn't seem to make a lot of sense. :) [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]]

*[[Hobbit (Denham)]] - POV, excessive use of bolding. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 23:39, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

**Maybe another title like [[Hobbit etymology]] fits better... [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 09:31, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

**Have cleaned up somewhat. Could do still do with a little more attention [[User:Arthur Holland|Arthur Holland]]

*[[Folk och Rackare]] Argh! Supposedly a Swedish pop band from the '70s, but it reads like a personal plea for more information on them, complete with someone's email address. I know nothing about this subject -- is it even salvageable? [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 22:52, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

:moved request to [[WP:RD|Reference desk]]. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 09:43, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

*[[VIM and Emacs commands]] - orphaned, unwikified comparison of how [[Emacs]] and [[Vim]] differ in the commands used for three (count 'em, three) functions --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]]

*[[Totenkopfring]] - unwikified, pov, with personal comments by the author here and there. A mess, basically. -- [[User:Francs2000|Graham &#9786;]] | [[User talk:Francs2000|Talk]] 22:09, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

**Wikified and removed first-person comments and a bit of POV, but there's still a huge block of German text in the middle of the article. - [[User:RedWordSmith|RedWordSmith]]

*[[Moritz Schlick]]--needs majour cleanup and translation. [[User:198.164.135.108|198.164.135.108]] 22:06, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

:*Just check the history next time as all it needed was a revert. :) Maybe some cleanup still, but its back to english. -- [[User:Tomf688|[[User:tomf688|tomf688]]]] 00:46, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Kevin Heffernan]]--what sport did he play? Needs clarification. [[User:Meelar|[[User:Meelar|Meelar]] [[User talk:Meelar|(talk)]]]] 21:13, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Perry Como]] -- The Talk page was a huge mass of copyvios. I can't confirm that the main article is a similar mass of copyvios but it reads like a transcription of articles written about Perry Como while he was still alive -- the familiarity, the present tense, the emphasis on what a great guy he is, rather than encyclopedic facts. Needs a massive re-write even if it's not copyvio. -- [[User:Antaeus Feldspar|Antaeus Feldspar]] 19:46, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

**Wow. WORST ARTICLE EVER. Did a big cleanup, but someone should probably go back and sweep the floors. Deleted tons of stuff. It was a tribute, not an article. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 23:48, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Filet mignon]]--I can't believe we didn't have an article on this. Is this a mis-spelling? [[User:Meelar|[[User:Meelar|Meelar]] [[User talk:Meelar|(talk)]]]] 18:46, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

** No, that's proper spelling. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 20:41, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

*<s>[[Wind-up]] below says "See '''[[nhang]]''' for a wind-up that has so far not been spotted by wikidemics." Might need checking. - [[User:RedWordSmith|RedWordSmith]] 18:01, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)</s> <!-- timestamp's important here for history -->

**Oh ha-ha, very funny. I get it now -- the message in wind-up is a wind up. [Rolls eyes] If someone could confirm please. - [[User:RedWordSmith|RedWordSmith]]

*[[Wind-up]] could be made more elegant - and the meanings separated.

*[[Arsenicosis]] - can someone fact check this one, sounds fishy. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 14:00, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

:Alcohol poisoning by another name?

*[[Huang Yuanyong]] strange formatting, at times ungrammatical

*[[Parthasarathy Kovil]] - a Hindu temple, I presume. Unwikified, stubby, lacking context. --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|&circ;]] (Relisted(had not cleanup banner) by [[User:JesseW|JesseW]] on 06:37, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC) )

**wikified and improved a little (now at least it says where it is). Still a pretty poor stub though [[User:Grutness|Grutness]] 06:58, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Speed Adventure]] - Tagged Oct 27, but not listed--similar to VfDed [[America Adventure]] ([[Wikipedia:Votes_for_deletion/America_Adventure]]). [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]] 04:24, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

**Now on VfD. Prognosis: negative. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 08:12, 19 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Mellenthin]] Text dump, probably with bad title, possible copyvio. [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]] 04:10, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

::Moved to [[Frederich von Mellenthin]] as per wikipedia naming policy/wikified and heading formatting, if copyvio, then needs rewording. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 21:07, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Tomás Ruíz González]] Unwikified, needs dates (at least) checked--ideally by someone fluent in English, but knows Spanish, as most hits are. [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]] 00:51, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Norwegian Wood (novel)]] POV rant about japanese novel [[User:Lady Tenar|Lady Tenar]] 00:31, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

:Seems to be proper stub now. Needs expansion. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 14:02, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Shrone Hill]] - unwikified POV piece about a ___location in (I think) Ireland- I'm not sure where to begin, or whether to just send it to vfd. -[[User:Finn-Zoltan|FZ]] 02:10, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

* [[Male homosexuality and vasopressin]] -- needs copyvio checking (see its talk page), editing for style, fact-checking. Possibly contact original author? -- Anon.

**Original research, to Vfd. [[User:Wyllium|Wyllium]] 11:35, 2004 Nov 16 (UTC)

*[[John Nebthos]], thick prose needs to be broken down. [[User talk:TPK|T.]][[User:TPK|PK]] <small>18:17, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)</small>

**If this is some guy's thesis, which it appears to be, should it even be an entry? [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 17:45, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

So far, the only dragon colors known are green (new dragon-unknown rider), blue ([[Saphira]] - [[Eragon (character)|Eragon]], [[Brom (Inheritance)|Brom]]), red ([[Thorn (Inheritance)|Thorn]] - [[Murtagh]]) and, we can assume [[Morzan]] since riders swords are the same color as their dragon), gold ([[Glaedr]] - [[Oromis]]), black ([[Shruikan]] - [[Galbatorix]]), white ([[Bid'Daum]] - Eragon the elf), brown (Mentioned by the elf Rhunon and[[ Brom]] tells [[Eragon]] that [[Miremel]] was brown), and purple (Mentioned by CP in an interview).

===November 15===

*[[Public credit]]. Unwikfied text dump. I listed this here yesterday, but someone seems to have deleted it without doing any work on the article. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 23:32, Nov 15, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Viera]] context please! <s>might be patent nonsense but i'm not quite sure</s> -is seemingly some [[final fantasy]] stuff [[User:Lady Tenar|Lady Tenar]] 23:26, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

**It's a race from [[Final Fantasy Tactics Advance]], which links to it -- I've put a merge notice on it, since it's detail too granular considering that this race ''only'' appears in this one game.

*[[Walden O'Dell]] - Blatent POV, poor English, probably some factual errors - do "most" people vote on Diebold machines? [[User:Pakaran|Pakaran]] [[User talk:Pakaran|(ark a pan)]] 17:48, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Punk]] - This disambiguation page needs a major cleaning up, it's ''way'' too long, most of the meanings need to be trimmed and/or moved to separate pages to keep it ballooning into a monster. --[[User:Lexor|Lexor]]|[[User talk:Lexor|Talk]] 17:13, Nov 15, 2004 (UTC)

:Shortened, remains are on talk page for inclusion in more specific articles. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 11:42, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)

*[[bogan]] - needs [[NPOV]]ing [[User:Clarkk|clarkk]]

**Yes, but how? The term describes a stereotype, and the stereotype it describes is accurately reported. It may appear to be a POV, but it would be difficult to write it in any other way. [[User:Grutness|Grutness]]

*[[StarCraft Diplomacy]] - needs formatting [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 09:29, Nov 15, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Five Patients]] Text dump. Copyvio? [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]] 04:28, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Tabou Combo]] Probably a magazine article or something like that. [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]] 04:22, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Alexander Hamilton]] - see [http://www.techcentralstation.com/111504A.html]

**Gee. A bit of a wake-up call. Made some fixes, but others should read the article and work on this too. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 05:23, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

***Really needs grammar and spelling fixes. [[User:JesseW|JesseW]] 07:15, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Winx Club]] Huh? Apparently some kind of animated TV show. [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]] 03:02, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Grouphug.us]] - no consensus to delete on vfd -- [[User:Francs2000|Graham &#9786;]] | [[User talk:Francs2000|Talk]] 02:12, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Retinoic acid]] - unwikified text dump. Copyvio? [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 00:46, Nov 15, 2004 (UTC)

** The beginning seems to be from the American Heritage Dictionary of the American Language. See [http://www.yourdictionary.com/ahd/r/r0193760.html], [http://www.bartleby.com/61/37/R0193760.html]. The rest seems to be from [http://www.phudson.com/SKIN/retina.html]. <s>I'll list it for speedy deletion.</s> --[[User:Falsifian|Falsifian]] 04:08, 2004 Nov 15 (UTC)

** Sorry, I mean under copyright violaions, not speedy deletion. --[[User:Falsifian|Falsifian]] 04:14, 2004 Nov 15 (UTC)

*[[Cunning folk]] lots of irrelevant asides, filler material and spelling mistakes. [[User:Bacchiad|Bacchiad]] 08:56, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Here is a chart of the known dragons and their riders.

===November 14===

Dragons Rider Color

*[[Reddiar]] - The English on this needs work. probably heading to vfd if it can't be fixed up. --[[User:DMG413|DMG413]] 23:20, 14 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Chris Barnes]] - needs a less breezy style and some NPOV; maybe we need a whole new page devoted to cleaning up these fannish music articles --[[User:Szyslak|Szyslak]]

**In fact, I propose that the following words and phrases be banned from Wikipedia for all time: "influential," "famous," "groundbreaking," "pioneer," "innovative," "devoted following," "beloved by fans around the world" --[[User:Szyslak|Szyslak]]

*[[Women's fiction]] - stubby, POV? --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]]

*[[Nuestra Señora de Monserrate]] - Spanish/Portugese non-wikified article. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 19:43, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)

** It's in Spanish. I've tried searching for it on the Net, and couldn't find it, but I'm still convinced it's a possible copyvio. From the way it's written, I'd wager it's a press-release or a newsitem copied from a possibly local Christian magazine. --[[User:Pc13|Pc13]] 18:14, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[The Spire]] - non-encyclopedic [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 19:43, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)+wikify, minor copyedit [[User:Denni|Denni]][[User_talk:Denni|<font color=#228822>&#9775;</font>]] 20:29, 2004 Nov 14 (UTC)

*[[Beberrua]] - some text dump. Claims it was researched by writer. Needs serious wikifying and general tidy + possible rewrite. [[User:Estel|Estel]] 17:48, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Spacesynth]] - never heard of genre, needs fact checking, could be a "vanity" genre. --[[User:Lexor|Lexor]]|[[User talk:Lexor|Talk]] 16:16, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Knysna]] - full of trivia about some non-notable couple from Kent going on hilliday there. [[User:Steinsky|Joe D]] [[User talk:Steinsky|(t)]] 15:36, 14 Nov 2004 (UTC)

**removed the trivia and folksiness to leave useful information. Still needs work[[User:Grutness|Grutness]]

*[[Arana]] - something to do with a comic strip character. [[User:Deb|Deb]] 11:24, 14 Nov 2004 (UTC)

** It's about the main star from the restarted [[Amazing Fantasy]] comic book, published by [[Marvel Comics]]. I'll take a look at it, possibly merge it with the Amazing Fantasy entry. --[[User:Pc13|Pc13]] 18:16, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Ol' Dirty Bastard]] - full of spacing issues, capitalization issues, and the whole article has a POV-ish feel, mentioning that he was highly influential over and over. [[User:CryptoDerk|CryptoDerk]] 07:04, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Tani tabbal]] Unwikified. Possible copyvio? If not, needs to be moved to Tanni Tabbal. [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]] 05:15, 14 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Polyculturalism]] - very short, second sentence is unclear, references and external links need vetting; one's commented out because it's 404 right now. - [[User:RedWordSmith|RedWordSmith]]

*[[Gundam Seed Astray]] - wikification - [[User:MattTM|MattTM]] | [[User_talk:MattTM|talk]] 00:41, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Imeta]] - no consensus to delete on vfd, suggest leaving it here for a month to see if it improves. -- [[User:Francs2000|Graham &#9786;]] | [[User talk:Francs2000|Talk]] 00:37, 14 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Unknown / Unknown / Green

===November 13===

#Thorn /Murtagh /Red

*[[Ian Apperley]] Looks suspiciously like a vanity article to me [[User:Grutness|Grutness]]

#Saphira (2) / Eragon (2) / Blue

*[[Dry good]] No real content; mainly a plea for help with the topic. [[User:Joy Stovall|Joyous]]

#Saphira (1) / Brom / Blue

*[[Dictionary coder]] needs context, verification, style. [[User:Eric119|Eric119]] 22:45, 13 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Shrukian / Galbatorix /Black

*[[Drugware]] needs expansion, more formal language; perhaps merge with [[adware]] or [[spyware]] [[User:Joy Stovall|Joyous]]

#Glaedr / Oromis /Gold

*[[Wisconsin Mountain Bike Trails]] - I have no idea what to do with this. --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]] 21:49, 13 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Bid'daum /Eragon (1) / White

*[[Windows_NT_4.0_Enterprise_Server]], [[Windows_NT_4.0_Server]], [[Windows_NT_4.0_Terminal_Server]], [[Windows_NT_4.0_Workstation]] - very short stubs which should probably be merged into another Windows-related article. I have also asked for opinions on [[Talk:Microsoft Windows]]. --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]] 21:04, 13 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Unknown but probaly also named Thorn / Morzan / Red

*[[Government Emergency Telecommunications Service]] - Raw text dump. It's from a US government site, so there shouldn't be a copyright problem, it just needs to be made into a proper article. -[[User:FunnyMan3595|FunnyMan]] 17:39, Nov 13, 2004 (UTC)

#lormungr / Unknown / Unknown

**I did some cleanup and wikification -- [[User:Thickslab|thickslab]] 15:41, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

#vervada / none / Unknown

*[[Robert lee ferris]] - needs wikification, and a lot of work.

The (1) indicates the First Eragon or Saphira- the original rider and Brom's dragon and the (2) indicates the main character Eragon in the first and second book.

**Don't bother; highly unlikely to survive VfD. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 20:35, 13 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Bottom-up parsing]] - context, formatting. [[User:Neutrality|[[User:Neutrality|<b>Neutrality</b>]] ([[User talk:Neutrality|hopefully!]])]]

**I gave this some context, but I studied this too long ago to be the right person to write up the details. Someone must have recently studied [[compiler]] theory! -- [[User:Jmabel|Jmabel]] | [[User talk:Jmabel|Talk]] 07:27, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)

*[[William Jurgens]] - nothing but a quotation; no information about the man himself. It could go to Wikiquote, I suppose. --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]]

*[[Jawbreaker]] - UGly! [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]]

**Turned into disambig. Anyone who wants to write about [[Jawbreaker (movie)]] might as well start from scratch. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 20:42, 13 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Behija Zlatic]] -- Needs a few edits for clarity, wikify and NPOV. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]]

*[[Bit-plane]] - unwikified and nebelous block of text.

*[[Safelists]] - unwikified, mostly pov text dump [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]]

*[[Thirty something]] -- Portions are not neutral, needs cleanup. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]]

* [[Wolf-Hirschhorn syndrome]] - needs fact-checking, expansion. Contains a word, "statomoric", that occurs nowhere else on the net. Typo, or obscure medical term? -- [[User:Karada|Karada]]

* [[Olimpia Milano]] - Needs a lot of editing, some wikification, and an introduction. -- [[User:Falsifian|Falsifian]]

Here is a list of all the other known dragons mentioned by Brom in book 1 (Eragon):

===November 12===

*[[Middle Passage]] -- This could be expanded. Also feels too conversational, needs style fixes. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]]

* [[Autonomedia]] -- Press release... [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 22:18, 12 Nov 2004 (UTC)

** Down to a stub. Is there anything here of encyclopedic notability? -- [[User:Jmabel|Jmabel]] | [[User talk:Jmabel|Talk]] 08:42, Nov 14, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Summer Roberts]] - a mess. Highly POV. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 22:55, Nov 12, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Pietro Spiggia]] - devoid of actual information. [[User:Neutrality|[[User:Neutrality|<b>Neutrality</b>]] ([[User talk:Neutrality|hopefully!]])]] 22:19, Nov 12, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Armando Quintero Martínez]] - wikification, formatting, categories. [[User:Neutrality|[[User:Neutrality|<b>Neutrality</b>]] ([[User talk:Neutrality|hopefully!]])]]

*[[Wigg]] - dicdef(ish), and possibly too derivative of the OED --[[User:Rbrwr|rbrwr]][[User talk:Rbrwr|^&plusmn;]]

*[[Scott Mutter]] is gushing, breezy, virtually unwikied. Thought it might be a copyvio but I couldn't find it. - [[User:Lucky 6.9|Lucky 6.9]]

*[[Angels of the zodiac]] - needs sources. Google pulls up a few references (mostly personal websites), but nothing from any theological sources. -- [[User:Netoholic|Netoholic]] [[User talk:Netoholic|@]]

*[[Kenny Kramer]] - Layout; four large images should be resized or something. Actual text is ok. - [[User:RedWordSmith|RedWordSmith]]

**Removed all but 1 photo, which is plenty. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]]

*[[Radiometric dating]] - underwikified, may need refactoring

*[[Svenska Lufttrafik]] - needs to be made into a real article. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]]

*[[Barons di San Marciano]] - se [[Talk:Barons di San Marciano]] -- [[User:Francs2000|Graham &#9786;]] | [[User talk:Francs2000|Talk]]

*[[List of locomotives]] - see [[Talk:List of locomotives/delete]] -- [[User:Francs2000|Graham &#9786;]] | [[User talk:Francs2000|Talk]]

*[[List_of_hospitals_in_New_Zealand]] A country of 4 million people with only five hospitals? I don't think so... [[User:Grutness|Grutness]]

** Expanded list, but still needs cleanup on cities. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 22:18, 12 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Chills]] &mdash; survived VfD with only two voters, but needs cleanup. [[User:Cool Hand Luke|Cool Hand]] [[User talk:Cool Hand Luke|<font color="purple">Luke</font>]]

:* How about merging/redirecting with [[fever]]? [[User:Joy Stovall|Joyous]] 02:57, Nov 17, 2004 (UTC)

:*may also need a disamb for rock band [[The Chills]], too (article coming very soon!)[[User:Grutness|Grutness]]

*[[Anna Chlumsky]] &mdash; Makes sense only intermittently. [[User:TacoDeposit|Taco Deposit]] | [[User_talk:TacoDeposit|Talk-o Deposit]]

*[[King Rising Levitation]] - Is this illusion only performed by this one magician? Is this magician noteworthy enough to have an article about? If the answer to the first question is yes and the second is no, then we need to get rid of it. If the answer to the first is no, then get rid of the Cory King info and write an article about the illusion and how it's performed. If Cory King is a notable magician, we need an article about him. If this trick is only performed by him, redirect to article about him. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]]

:Performed by more magicians than just him. I'll have a look at it in light of [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Magic]]. However, I think writing how the illusion is performed, would break copyright against the illusion. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]]

#Jura

===November 11===

#Fundor (Who fought the giant sea snake)

*[[Dario Di Martino]] - unwikfied text dump, written by a non-native English speaker. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 23:24, Nov 11, 2004 (UTC)

#Galzra

*[[Selection (genetic algorithm)]] - needs a little work. [[User:Sarge Baldy|Sarge Baldy]] 23:04, Nov 11, 2004 (UTC)

#Briam

* [[Oscar van Dillen]] - to conform to wiki-bio style and some de-wikifying (in fact its generally quite confusing) -- [[User:Solipsist|Solipsist]] 17:57, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Ohen the Strong

* [[Auckland University Students Association]] - two lines on the AUSA, then the rest of the article is on other student associations in New Zealand. Either it needs to be on the AUSA alone (with other articles for other associations) or it should be renamed ''University students associations of New Zealand'' or similar [[User:Grutness|Grutness]] 12:14, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Gretiem

* [[Darwinian medicine]] formatting. [[User:Duncharris|Dunc]]|[[User talk:duncharris|&#9786;]] 11:21, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Beroan

*[[Opotiki]] Some interesting reminiscences, but do they belong in Wikipedia?[[User:Grutness|Grutness]] 07:49, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Roslarb

**Reminiscences deleted. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 18:08, 12 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Vanilor (male)

*[[Implicant]] Some kind of math concept? It's almost patent nonsense and an orphan, so I can't tell. [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]] 05:31, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Eridor (male)

*[[Saint Methodius]] - contains a text dump from some apparently free encyclopedia that should be integrated into current stub. --[[User:Whosyourjudas|Whosyourjudas]] [[User talk:Whosyourjudas|(talk)]] 03:37, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Ingothold (male)

**That "free encyclopedia" is a Wiki mirror. Removing cleanup tag. [[User:Wyllium|Wyllium]] 21:25, 2004 Nov 12 (UTC)

#Miremel (female, brown dragon)

* [[Wang Shiwei]] - looks like the start of an interesting article by an author whose native language is not English. Needs copyediting, fact-checking, Wikification, possible linking to the zh: wikipedia if there is an equivalent already there. -- [[User:Karada|Karada]] 00:14, 12 Nov 2004 (UTC)

#Opheila (female)

#Lenora (female)

[[Category:Fictional dragons]]

===November 10===

*[[Lowell Weicker]] and [[Lowell P. Weicker, Jr.]] need to be merged. The latter article is much better, so if there is no information in the other one, the other one should be deleted and the good one moved there. [[User:Academic Challenger|Academic Challenger]] 02:27, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Intellect Games]] - underwikified, POV, typos -[[User:18.21.0.84|18.21.0.84]] 23:41, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

**I did some cleanup on this one. [[User:Toreau|Toreau]] 10:56, Nov 11, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Brown basilisk]] - likely school project. Needs fact check and fmt, some content might be better at [[Basiliscus (genus)]]. [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]]

:*[[Basiliscus basiliscus]] has similar issues. [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]]

*[[Lisa Cheung]] - new page, I redirected it from [[Lisa cheung]], but it seems awfully incomplete. Reads like vanity. Does anyone know her? [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 21:07, Nov 10, 2004 (UTC)

:*Didn't find anything about a notable teacher, so I changed to an artist that gets plenty of hits. Still a micro-stub, as I need to get to the bank. [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]]

*[[Tlahuelpuchi]] - is this real or fictional? Needs fmt, and some context in which the term is found. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 21:01, Nov 10, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Dominical letter]] - Someone copied material straight out of [http://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05109a.htm] [[Catholic Encyclopedia]] with some escape sequences (e.g. =92) all around. -- [[User:Paddu|Paddu]] 20:15, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[canton of Villeneuve-l'Archevêque]] needs a term rewritten - "recutting of the districts": the historical event to which this refers to could be given a mention elsewhere.

*[[Gers]] (France): the Condom link still leads to the object rather than the place.

**fixed. -- [[User:Paddu|Paddu]] 20:15, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

* [[Patrick Matthews]] substub on some bassist. [[User:Duncharris|Dunc]]|[[User talk:duncharris|&#9786;]] 17:50, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Maxim (saying)]] - bad, borderline speedy to be honest -- [[User:Francs2000|Graham &#9786;]] | [[User talk:Francs2000|Talk]] 10:21, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

* [[Medha Hari]] - a Indian Bharatanatyam ballet dancer, seems notable, but the language is poor and it reads like an advert. -- [[User:Netoholic|Netoholic]] [[User talk:Netoholic|@]] 04:39, 2004 Nov 10 (UTC)

*[[Paul Harris]] - unwikified text dump, but probably too rambling to be copyvio. He apparently is a musician of some not (try searching ''"Paul Harris" magic''), but much seems hard to verify, movie claim runs counter to IMDb (diff Paul Harris) [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]]

:*I think you meant magician instead of musician. Anyway, I'll give a look and see if there's something salvagable in there. couldn't hurt my [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Magic|WikiProject Magic]] either :) [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 09:56, Nov 10, 2004 (UTC)

::*D'oh! Yes, I meant magician. [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]] 22:49, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Jiang Zemin 16 congress]] - unwikified research paper. -- [[User:Jake Nelson|Jake]]

* [[Hauke Harder]]. Needs cleanup. - [[User:Ta bu shi da yu|Ta bu shi da yu]] 03:46, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Saphira's parents were Iormunger and Vervada. Iormunger was a rider's dragon but Vervada was a wild female dragon who only gave 1 egg to the riders.

=== November 9 ===

{{inheritance}}

*[[Echeveria]] - taxobox covers text and isn't aligned to the right. Can't find what's wrong, coding seems similar to box on [[Horse]]. If it's fixed, can someone leave an interesting factoid from the article at [[Template talk:Did you know]]? [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 21:51, Nov 9, 2004 (UTC)

:*The coding is probably fine, it's just that there's no contraint on the width of the taxobox, as far as I can tell. Since this box has some REALLY long text in it, it takes up the entire article width. As a stop-gap measure, I placed the taxobox inside another table with a given width. Can anyone think of a better solution? - [[User:RedWordSmith|RedWordSmith]]

:::The only other solution I can think of (done in the article) would be to put linebreaks in the long entries, but that's arguably just a hack that requires more work. Could/Should [[Template:Taxobox_begin]] set the width, preferably from a passed parameter? Or have a [[Template:Taxobox_begin_width_30_percent]] for these cases? [[User:Niteowlneils|Niteowlneils]] 02:14, 10 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Gapan City]] lacks lead (where is this place?) needs wiki, possible copyvio; basically just a huge chunk of text, bits of which seem interesting, if true. --[[User:Woggly|Woggly]] 10:11, 9 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Condorcet Criterion]] needs a once-over for mos, wfy, etc.

*[[In Search of Space]] - Huh? [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 09:06, Nov 9, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Calamity Jane (movie)]] - unwikified, extremly POV. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 08:38, Nov 9, 2004 (UTC)

**Took a crack at removing POV, some copyediting, also added context on their real-life romance or lack thereof. [[User:Katefan0|Katefan0]] 02:09, Nov 15, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Haider]] - some kind of bio--[[User:Petaholmes|nixie]] 08:05, 9 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[New Trier High School]] - I deleted large chunks of text which were copies from the school's website and newspaper articles. This leaves unwikified text and not much worthwhile. I'm not going to list this on VfD because I *know* it's a notable school, but it should be clear in the article that it is. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 07:10, Nov 9, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Lotte Giants]]. Basically an ad for a baseball team, as it stands. Needs wikifying, deletion of ad elements, and expansion so it actually says something worthwhile. -[[User:R. fiend|R. fiend]] 06:17, 9 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Need for Speed]] poor stub, lacks relevant informaiton [[User:SYSS Mouse|SYSS Mouse]] 04:47, 9 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Major League Baseball television contracts]] needs wikifying -- [[User:Francs2000|Graham &#9786;]] | [[User talk:Francs2000|Talk]] 01:19, 9 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Heredity]] - super-stubby for a major concept. --[[User:Fastfission|Fastfission]] 00:40, 9 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Fur trade]] - poor stub, POV, no real information [[User:Jeeves|Jeeves]] 02:38, 9 Nov 2004 (UTC)

[[it:Drago (trilogia dell'eredità)]]

=== November 8 ===

[[Category:Inheritance Trilogy characters]]

*[[George W. Bush's first term as president of the United States]] - I just finished writing this article, but it could really use some more imformation and a few pictures.--[[User:The stuart|The_stuart]] 22:02, 8 Nov 2004 (UTC) More information should be added, specifically about Bush's other policies beside foreign issues. -[[User:Somepostman|Simon]] 02:05, Nov 12, 2004 (UTC)

[[Category:Fictional magic users]]

*[[WWE SmackDown! Here Comes the Pain]] - POV and non-encyclopedic. [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 18:56, Nov 8, 2004 (UTC)

*[[The Hollow (Charmed)]] - needs formatting, context. Does it even warrant own article? - [[User:MacGyverMagic|[[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm]]|^{[[User talk:MacGyverMagic|(talk)]]}]] 12:05, Nov 8, 2004 (UTC)

*[[The Turn of the Screw]] Very poorly written throughout, particularly section on plot. [[User:Rje|Rje]]

*[[Superbit]] needs a rewrite by someone familiar with the subject. Currently written in non-encyclopedian, first-person style. [[User:Jni|jni]]

:* Working on it. --[[User:Phils|Phils]] 17:34, 8 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Double Teamed]] - Needs clarification, and re-wording - [[User:198.164.135.20|198.164.135.20]] 20:12, 8 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Dream#Lucid_dreaming]] Lucid Dreaming section smacks of New Age claptrappery - [[User:Tempshill|Tempshill]] 22:56, 8 Nov 2004 (UTC)

:*It needs a cleanup, but it ''is'' a valid phenomenon. Since there's a separate entry on it, there's no need for so much here though. [[User:Grutness|Grutness]]

*[[Historicity of Jesus]] complete mess, under control by a new user who claims he'll "be done next week" [[User:Sam Spade|Sam]] [[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=User_talk:Sam_Spade&action=edit&section=new '''Spade''']] 01:14, 8 Nov 2004 (UTC)

*[[Guo Jing]] - unwikified text dump. [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 00:37, Nov 8, 2004 (UTC)

*[[Fabrizio Morretti]] - unwikified text dump, breezy style [[User:RickK|Rick]][[User talk:RickK|K]] 00:09, Nov 8, 2004 (UTC)

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