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**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 18:36, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*"Falcon 9 test plan calls for the" - does this need to be updated?

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

:::I did some further copyediting on this. Since it is an introductory paragraph to the section, I think it best for it to describe the general test plan for these post-mission booster descent tests, not just any one particular test. The test history is better covered in the paragraphs below the introduction. See what you think. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 16:02, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*{{cn}} needs addressed at the end of that paragraph.

**<s>{Fixed}. I just reused the reference at the beginning of the next paragraph, since that whole paragraph about that very flight. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)</s> Never mind, I didn't actually fix this, I fixed something else instead:P. Sorry. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:05, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

***{{Fixed}}—for real, this time. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 20:57, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

*"the booster stage attitude was reversed" - also confusing.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*"With the many..." - quite colloquial.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*The '''See also''' section would ideally be removed if a good way to link to [[Falcon (rocket family)]] can be found.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 19:48, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

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:::No worries. That will be fine. (and BTW, just late yesterday US time, SpaceX and NASA announced that the CRS-3 flight would be delayed at least a couple of weeks, so the second high-altitude, booster controlled-descent flight test won't occur any earlier than March 30th.) [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 03:34, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

===Part II===

I'll just look through it again since it has changed [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=SpaceX_reusable_launch_system_development_program&diff=599685975&oldid=597323556 quite a bit]. This review shouldn't take long. [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]^x[[User talk:Jamesx12345|12345]] 12:06, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

*A larger family photo would be nice - maybe 250px or something.

**{{in process}} I'm having a bit of trouble with the resize parameter; it is dropping the image caption whenever I replace "thumb" with "250px". I asked for some help. — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 04:51, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

***Fixed. [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]^x[[User talk:Jamesx12345|12345]] 15:57, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

*"Restarts are required at both supersonic..." - perhaps a quick note about why there are two restarts?

**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 04:51, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

*"throttleable rocket engine technology" - this bullet is quite short, and also uncited. An explanation (or even a definition) would make it more useful.

**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 04:24, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

*"order of magnitude" could be linked (just for the definition.)

**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 04:24, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

*"However, even if SpaceX is successful with the technology..." - that's a really fascinating point.

**Thanks. {{done}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 04:24, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

*I would spell out the full name of the [[Tsiolkovsky rocket equation]] - it's quite well known.

**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 04:24, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

*"...nearly precludes it." - this would need a ref in this form.

**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 04:24, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm happy now that I've read through all of it, and that it meets the GA criteria. Thanks for being much quicker at responding to my comments than I was to yours. [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]^x[[User talk:Jamesx12345|12345]] 16:05, 18 March 2014 (UTC)