Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1: Difference between revisions

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**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 18:36, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*"Falcon 9 test plan calls for the" - does this need to be updated?

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

:::I did some further copyediting on this. Since it is an introductory paragraph to the section, I think it best for it to describe the general test plan for these post-mission booster descent tests, not just any one particular test. The test history is better covered in the paragraphs below the introduction. See what you think. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 16:02, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*{{cn}} needs addressed at the end of that paragraph.

**<s>{Fixed}. I just reused the reference at the beginning of the next paragraph, since that whole paragraph about that very flight. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)</s> Never mind, I didn't actually fix this, I fixed something else instead:P. Sorry. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:05, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

***{{Fixed}}—for real, this time. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 20:57, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

*"the booster stage attitude was reversed" - also confusing.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*"With the many..." - quite colloquial.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*The '''See also''' section would ideally be removed if a good way to link to [[Falcon (rocket family)]] can be found.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<fontspan colorstyle="color:green;">talk</fontspan>]]</small>} 19:48, 9 March 2014 (UTC)