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FWIW: This has become more of a summary of the XM9 pistol trials than the actual Joint Service Small Arms Program. JSSAP's mission and history encompasses more than just the XM9. [[User:D.E. Watters|D.E. Watters]] ([[User talk:D.E. Watters|talk]]) 12:48, 25 September 2018 (UTC)
== Prose ==
Does anyone else find the overall prose and grammar of this article to be lacking or downright bad? While informative, it feels as though it were written in a rush or was written for someone of a very elementary reading level.
I'd make changes but I am not an expert in this topic/event, and I'd loathe to make changes that adjust meaning or intent due to my own misunderstandings/lack of knowledge. [[User:SpecialAgentCake|SpecialAgentCake]] ([[User talk:SpecialAgentCake|talk]]) 18:20, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
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