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== Adding New Sections ==
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Some updates: I've added a few sections to the wiki stub, and re-phrased some previous text. Also, I'm considering removing the first citation that redirects users to the 'Andrew File System Retirement' - I believe it was initially intended to redirect to an article or paper that is now unavailable on the website. I am currently looking for other websites where the original article can be found and if I've succeeded, I will add it back into the wiki article.
Additionally, two more sections are yet to be added by me: the 'Criticisms' and the 'Propositions' section. I am considering making a graphic to illustrate the propositions or the model, but I believe the one created by the previous contributor sums up the model perfectly. My contributions are done, I am just making a few final touches, and will update here once I've finished contributing to the article. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Teenytinyhooman|Teenytinyhooman]] ([[User talk:Teenytinyhooman#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Teenytinyhooman|contribs]]) 05:25, 9 February 2022 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
== Fixing broken links and repairing citations ==
I would like to let the editors and moderators know that I have completed the editing of the article, except for a few minor changes which I will take up during the next five days.
New changes to the article involve fixing and adding better links to the body, and also fixing citations. I noticed that citations sometimes had missing values that were highlighted by the wiki editor, so I resolved this issue by collecting data on the cited documents, and ensuring that they were cited with proper information. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Teenytinyhooman|Teenytinyhooman]] ([[User talk:Teenytinyhooman#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Teenytinyhooman|contribs]]) 05:10, 11 February 2022 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
== Final Thoughts and Suggestions ==
Working on this stub article (which I have now noticed has been moved out of the stub section, so yay!) has been a great journey. I loved picking up information, reading up on original articles and also figuring out how to best present the information from research articles in a way wiki explorers and students could easily understand. So far, I have re-worked on the original contribution in terms of grammar and sentence restructuring. While I have not deleted any of the original contributor's content, I certainly added to the content, by first including a 'Backgrounds' section, and then an 'Applications' and 'Criticisms' section. I also actively worked on finding citations, adding credible sources to the article, verifying information. Finally, I re-worked on some sentence structures and added some finishing touches by resolving citations and missing links. I will still be looking to make slight changes to this article over the course of the next few days, but as mentioned earlier, this will only be minor. A majority of my contribution has now been completed. I very much enjoyed the work and am glad to see that the article has been removed from the stub category of Wikipedia! [[User:Teenytinyhooman|Teenytinyhooman]] ([[User talk:Teenytinyhooman|talk]]) 05:18, 11 February 2022 (UTC)
== Removing Weak Citations ==
Hi all! After finishing up my work and going through the final stages of proof-reading, I've realised that one of the citations in the 'Criticisms' section - citation [9], has a very low impact factor, and therefore I decided it was best to remove it so as to maintain the reliability of the article. Would welcome any suggestions or alternate papers for the same. Thanks! [[User:Teenytinyhooman|Teenytinyhooman]] ([[User talk:Teenytinyhooman|talk]]) 07:00, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
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