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Hi Violet,
Please add an infobox. If you can't find an appropriate template, please leave a message for the administrators in your talk page.
:Hello Maryam. It is almost impossible for me to find a infobox template on the psychology or criminology related topics. So I added a sidebar, I wonder if that is okay? [[User:Xdarkfantasyx|Xdarkfantasyx]] ([[User talk:Xdarkfantasyx|talk]]) 14:08, 29 May 2019 (UTC)Violet
Hi Violet,
Has your article been reviewed? It doesn't have any traces of a review (no rating or templates)!!! Have you deleted those templates?[[User:Maryam.alavinia|Maryam.alavinia]] ([[User talk:Maryam.alavinia|talk]]) 13:42, 28 June 2019 (UTC)
== Addressing article issues ==
This article's original contributor, @[[User:Xdarkfantasyx|Xdarkfantasyx]], seems to have edited Wikipedia mostly to contribute this article and no longer appears to be active. That makes addressing some of the existing issues with the article challenging to address. However, I will set them out as listed in the clean-up tag I added to the top of the article.
# This article is currently an [[Wikipedia:Orphan|orphan]] article, and has probably been one since its inception, and certainly since 2021. All that is required to fix this is to find another appropriate [[WP:ARTICLESPACE|main/article-space]] article that will link to this one.
# This article uses [[Wikipedia:External links|external links]] within the body text of the article. These links will take the reader off Wikipedia to another website, if they follow the link to seek more information. Such links should be replaced by a corresponding Wikipedia article, or else become a [[Wikipedia:Citing sources|citation]] or [[WP:FOOTNOTES|footnote]]. The external links can be put in the "'''External links''"section of the article, too.
# The [[MOS:LEAD|lead section]] needs improvement. It should answer at least some, if not all, of the following key questions: '''Who'''? '''What'''? '''Where'''? '''When'''? and '''Why'''? After reading the lead section, I am left wondering ''Where is the [[Sequential Intercept Model]] used?'', ''What is its purpose?'', ''When it it applicable?'' and ''Why was it developed in the first place?'' There seems to be a certain amount of assumed knowledge that one needs to know about this subject before reading the full article, to understand it. Unfortunately most [[Wikipedia:Reader Knows Nothing|readers will know nothing]] about the subject, so they [[WP:RF|need some explanation to orientate themselves]].
# This article has been written as if the model is relevant globally, yet the model appears to have been developed within the context of the United States justice system. This raises the question of is the model applicable elsewhere in the world and, if so, where else is it used. Also, where else in the world is it not used because those places have a different justice system system or a different model for dealing with people having mental health issues, or confront the problem in a different way.
Feel free to deal with any problem on the list, but I suspect dealing with them in order is the best way to go. - [[User:Cameron Dewe|Cameron Dewe]] ([[User talk:Cameron Dewe|talk]]) 00:01, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
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