Talk:Tensor network theory: Difference between revisions

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[[User:Andrea Trementozzi|Andrea Trementozzi]] ([[User talk:Andrea Trementozzi|talk]]) 21:31, 23 November 2013 (UTC)

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*I agree you need to link to what a tensor is.

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Have not responded to comments on talk page from previous reviewer.

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No course page banner

Figures are all placed on right hand side and do not line up with section of text they represent. Try to either move them into text or left side and directly reference them.

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*The writing style, using sentence openers like, "in fact", "likewise" seem colloquial and non encyclopedic. It appears more of a narrative of someone else's research.

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* You have the history, an example, and an application, however you do not have a section looking at the actual mathematical model and basic principles of this theory. There is not model section or framework. If someone wanted to learn what it was and try to use it to solve a problem. This page would not have enough information.

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[[User:Keval tilva|Keval tilva]] ([[User talk:Keval tilva|talk]]) 17:58, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

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*Well-researched and organized

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*About 17,440 bytes

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*It was a little hard for me to follow through and understand. Maybe you could use less technical terms and jargon.

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*There were 13 references but they weren't much recent.

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*You have sufficient links wherever possible but tensor could be linked.

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*Pictures could be formatted better and the layout should be more organized.

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*Well written but you could avoid using a lot of technical terms and explain them more.

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--[[User:Angela Mariam Thomas|Angela Mariam Thomas]] ([[User talk:Angela Mariam Thomas|talk]]) comment added 15:33, 25 November 2013 (UTC)

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Thank you all for your peer reviews! I am addressing all your comments. The topic is relatively old and very theoretical. Therefore many of the references are a bit dated and applications of the theory bleed into other topics. I will take all suggestions into consideration and make fixes/improvements where needed. Thanks again!

[[User:Tam Van|Tam Van]] ([[User talk:Tam Van|talk]]) 20:27, 25 November 2013 (UTC)

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Fixes thus far:

*Fixed minor grammar issues

*Removed superfluous image of VOR arc

*Improved image arrangement.

*Added link to "tensor" article.

[[User:Tam Van|Tam Van]] ([[User talk:Tam Van|talk]]) 20:41, 25 November 2013 (UTC)

== gravitational tensor network ==

add Juan Martín Maldacena's work add Juan Martín Maldacena's work <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added

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23:02, 2 December 2016 (UTC)</small>

:: both [[brain]] and [[brane]] <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2a02:587:410a:c500:8d92:8418:8856:6cf1|2a02:587:410a:c500:8d92:8418:8856:6cf1]] ([[User talk:2a02:587:410a:c500:8d92:8418:8856:6cf1#top|talk]]) 23:04, 2 December 2016 (UTC)</small>

== Variance? ==

Given that the article talks about covariant and contravariant tensors, it would be nice to hear what the transformation group is. Otherwise the variance is merely a statement about typography, that is, where indices are written. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/81.224.188.19|81.224.188.19]] ([[User talk:81.224.188.19#top|talk]]) 16:03, 5 April 2021 (UTC)</small>