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===[[Avatar: The Last Airbender]]===
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Please consider this article as it ''just'' lost in the last nomination and I think it has improved enough to be a feature article. [[User:Parent5446|jeremybelpois]] 18:30, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
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*'''Weak support''' <s>even though 1d '''''From''''' ''Overview->Premise'' '''"fantastic animals"''' (Fantastic? Looks POV to me).</s> --[[User:SonicChao|SonicChao]] [[User talk:SonicChao|<sup>talk</sup>]] 18:55, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
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:*'''Comment''' There are few deficiencies. Though there is some POV, a lot of the seemingly opinion is realy the ''intended'' opinion set by the creators of the show. This means that through logical deduction the powers or abilities the animals contain (in your example) are made to amaze the show's audience.
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::*'''Comment'''"Fantastic" isn't POV. It this context, it refers to something being "[http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/fantastic Existing in or constructed from fantasy]"--[[User:Fyre2387|Fyre2387]] <sup>([[User talk:Fyre2387|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Fyre2387|contribs]])</sup> 20:04, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
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:::*'''Striked''' as per Fyre2387. --[[User:SonicChao|SonicChao]] [[User talk:SonicChao|<sup>talk</sup>]] 00:14, 3 December 2006 (UTC)
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*'''Comment''' The website references should use {{tl|cite web}}, and more inline citations are needed, some sections don't have any. The images need fair use rationales. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 20:12, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
:*'''Striked''' as per Parent5446. Problem addressed and completely resolved. (note, only the striked out part.)
:*'''Comment''' The {{tl|cite web}} template makes the article too messy as it puts a title, language, etc. about the source. However, I do agree that more citations are needed.
::*At the very least the url, title, and accessdate fields would need values. The more complete the source information the better. Sources aren't there to make the article pretty, they're there to make it verifiable. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 20:49, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
:*'''Comment''' OK, I filled in all I could do by using the {{tl|cite web}} template on all non-inline citations. You an check it out. [[User:Parent5446|jeremybelpois]] 21:33, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
::*I converted the first inline citation, can you handle the rest of those on your own? {{unsigned|Jay32183}}
:::*OK. I figured out how to do it now. I'll change them as fast as possible. {{unsigned|Parent5446}}
:::*Please don't strike other people comments, report that it's done and I'll strike it myself. Actually, you missed numbers 2 and 3 of the inline citations. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 20:07, 3 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''Support''' I support this article due to that I feel it is superior and it is well-written, unlike what it was four months ago. The only flaws are that there is not a list of the episodes on the page (since there is a seperate article for the epsiodes) and that there are only 19 inline citations. That is not much of a deficiency.{{unsigned|Parent5446|16:36, 2 December 2006 (UTC)}}
*'''No Vote''' Due to my extensive editing of all Avatar: The Last Airbender related articles, I refrain from voting on the subject of Bias. I hope that my other editors do the same. [[User:HeirToPendragon|H2P]] <sup>([[User_talk:HeirToPendragon|Yell at me]] for [[Special:Contributions/HeirToPendragon|what I've done]])</sup> 03:55, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
:*'''Support''' The article itself is definitely good enough to be featured, but I'm not quite sure about the links. The character bios linked to this page are mostly biased and some do not have their fiction made clear.[[User:Stretchyrubberbands|Stretchyrubberbands]]<sup>([[User_talk:Stretchyrubberbands| Tell me how to]] overcome [[Special:Contributions/Stretchyrubberbands|my stupidity]])</sup> 07:50, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''Support''' per Stretchyrubberbands. --[[User:Twlighter|Twlighter]] 19:00, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''Support''' as an editor of the aricle, I belive that this article has improved vastly from last time. (Actually I can't edit the article because McAffee stops the page from coming up completley, but thats another story) [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 01:48, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''Object''' Missing a lot of key information. No Production information, no critcal reaction, except for some rewards, no information on it sucess or how popular it is. The subsections in Influence are short, stubby and uneeded. They can easily be one or two sections. Media Information section just lists whats in another article instead of summarizing it in prose (with facts). <s>There is also a citation needed tag. See also section shouldn't have links that are already in the article.</s> All images need fair use rationale. <s>Sokka image has incorrect copyright info.</s> [[User:Medvedenko|Medvedenko]] 03:01, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
:*'''Comment''' There does not have to be information on how poplar it is, it is just an article on what the show is about. In addition, there may not be a lot of rsources for some information such as influence and production information. If you can come and find enough resources to write one or two sections of influence, then tell me and you can prove me wrong. Otherwise, a lot of your objection may not be possible to complete. Besides, the purpoose of the article is to draw people in and inform them about the show, not tell them about idols from a religion that influenced the show. The only reason anyone would put that would be for people really researching [[Avatar: The Last Airbender]] or to just make the article longer (which is not the point as a literary piece, including an article, only ha to be as long as it takes to make a point, which the article has clearly done).
::The article is NOT on what the show is about its about the show. No where in the body of the article (not the intro which only sumarizes what is in the article) does it say when the show aired, how it came about, who created it, where it was animated. All that information may not be available, but some of it is and it must be in there. Same goes for popularity and critical reaction. The article's focus should be on facts outside the show's story. If there is no reference on an Influence than it can't be in the article because that would original research. I said nothing about going into detail about the influences, I just wanted you to merge the subsections in influneces. Every Influence doesn't need its own section when they are only one or two sentences. [[User:Medvedenko|Medvedenko]] 03:27, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
:::The comment about "how popular" the show is refers not to what fanboys are saying but to the opinions of notable television critics and ratings inforamtion to show how large the audience is. I agree that that type of information should be included in all articles about television shows. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 03:30, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
::::Wait, I'm confused, why doesn't this work again?
::::*Originally slated to start November of [[2004]], ''Avatar: The Last Airbender'' debuted on TV [[February 21]], [[2005]] and is available on DVD or for download at the [[iTunes Store]] and the XBOX Marketplace. Produced at the Nickelodeon Animation Studios in Burbank, California, and animated in South Korea (where many animated television series are animated), it was co-created and executively produced by [[Michael Dante DiMartino]] and [[Bryan Konietzko]].
::::*A consistently high ratings performer in the [[Nicktoons]] lineup, even outside of its intended six-to-eleven-year-old [[demographic]], ''Avatar: The Last Airbender'' is popular with both audiences and critics. The series' success prompted Nickelodeon to order a second twenty-episode season, which began airing on [[March 17]], [[2006]],<ref>{{cite web | url = http://www.prnewswire.com/cgi-bin/stories.pl?ACCT=104&STORY=/www/story/01-24-2006/0004266998&EDATE= | title = Article on Launch of Avatar Card Game | accessdate = 2006-12-03 | author = Carlsbad | date = 2006-01-24 | publisher = PR Newswire}}
</ref> and a third season has been announced to begin airing in [[2007]].<ref name="newsitem_no=17250"/> Notable merchandise based on the series include five DVD sets of episodes, six-inch scale action figures, a [[Avatar: The Last Airbender (video game)|video game]], stuffed animals distrubited by Paramount Parks, and two Lego sets.<ref>{{cite web | url = http://www.gaming-age.com/news/2006/8/21-44 | title = THQ Announces Games Convention | accessdate = 2006-12-03 | author = Jim Cordeira | date = 2006-08-21 | publisher = Gaming Age}}</ref>
::::[[User:HeirToPendragon|H2P]] <sup>([[User_talk:HeirToPendragon|Yell at me]] for [[Special:Contributions/HeirToPendragon|what I've done]])</sup> 05:38, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
::::Medvedenko, are you by any chance suggesting that we try to make the production information end up like the one in the House article? [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/House_%28TV_series%29#Production_information] Or am I completely off the wall in saying that? [[User:Whydoit|Whydoit]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Whydoit|Strangle Me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Whydoit|My Mistakes]])</sup> 08:42, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
:::::Yes a section similar to ''House'' or other television articles is what I'm getting at. The Introduction shouldn't contain information that isn't found elsewhere in the article. Though I hope you'll be able to find more related information than whats already in the Introduction.[[User:Medvedenko|Medvedenko]] 20:22, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
: I fixed the sokka problem and the catation needed tag. Will work on free-use images. [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 20:03, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
::added Fair Use Rational to all images. [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 20:18, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
:::Recent images of Chinese characters do not have Fair Use rationale, but they should not be used anyway since it should be easy to get a free to use symbols. Also the use of lines in the Characters section makes the section look very ugly.[[User:Medvedenko|Medvedenko]] 21:59, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
::::<s>I'm of the opinion that those images are not fair use at all, since they are not directly taken from the show, but were made by a Wikipedian, and depict ordinary (albeit archaic) Chinese characters that just happen to be in the show, and were not specifically created for the show itself. But I don't know enough to say for sure.</s> And I really like the lines in the Characters section. I think they divide it up much better than just space, but I guess that's just one opinion. --[[User:Herald Alberich|Herald Alberich]] 23:13, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
:::::The images clearly say they are a from a television show. They certainly look like they are from Avatar as well. Same art style. [[User:Medvedenko|Medvedenko]] 00:48, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
::::As [[User:Sage of Ice|Sage of Ice]] stated on the [[Talk:Avatar: The Last Airbender|talk page]], they are screenshots after all. My mistake. --[[User:Herald Alberich|Herald Alberich]] 05:26, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''<s>Weak </s>Support''' <s> After reading the above '''I think all we really need to do is re-arrange some of the popularity and influence notes''' (maybe even elaborating/adding on a few?)</s>, but I also think along with H2P that I might only be supporting because of my own personal bias. Other than that the article had com a long way since the last nomination. [[User:Whydoit|Whydoit]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Whydoit|Strangle Me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Whydoit|My Mistakes]])</sup> 08:25, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
**'''Comment''' Alrighty then, it seems just a few more references are needed. [[User:Whydoit|Whydoit]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Whydoit|Why]]...[[Special:Contributions/Whydoit|do it?]])</sup> 05:02, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''Weak Support''': It is a good article, but with the tag about the lead on it, I can only give it my weak support. I believe that the lead is okay, but at the same time I respect the talk page. On the talk page they claim that it does have some shortcomings, and I agree it is not perfect, but this article is still worthy of FA status.[[User:Hairchrm|-Hairchrm]] 03:45, 8 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''Oppose'''. I've never heard of the show before and so approached the article with a blank slate. I think that for someone in my position, the article gives a pretty good summary of the show. But I think more is needed to make the show a featured article:
**<s>"Media information" section simply is a link to the daughter page. It should be written to include several paragraphs or two in summary style.</s>
***Done, although it could use some cleaning up. [[User:Y BCZ|Y BCZ]] 17:43, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
**There's only two critical reactions listed, and it's a pseudonymous toonzone.net review and a SciFi.com piece, which is probably not sufficient. See [[The Wire (TV series)]] and [[Arrested Development]] for examples. I would like to know how general TV critics (i.e. those who don't work in a particular genre) have reviewed the show.
***I will find more critics and list there sources within the next few days. Keep checking.{{unsigned|Parent5446}}
****There are no critical reviews on [[Avatar: The Last Airbender]]. I could not find any, even in the archives! There are only secondary and other reviews. Please help me find some. [[User:Parent5446|jeremybelpois]]<sup>([[User talk:Parent5446|Murder me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Parent5446|my actions]])</sup> 02:30, 15 December 2006 (UTC)
**<s>"However, given that even Spirit-infused characters such as Princess Yue have been shown incapable of bending, there is also a likely genetic factor involved." How does this conclusion follow from that premise?</s>
***The article used to not have that sentance in it. I believe it flowed better without it and took it out.[[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 14:24, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
**<s>"Also, according to an interview with the artists involved in creating Avatar" not cited.</s>
***It is mentioned on the Book 1 DVD Box Set, 6th dvd. This is form the [[Appa]] Page. How do we cite a DVD refrence? [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 18:23, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
****I think you can use {{tl|cite visual}} for DVD references. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 18:53, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
****Done [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 20:53, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
**"<s>Zuko's principal rival throughout Book One." What is Book One? What is Book Two?</s>
***Added sentance explaining this. [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 14:35, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
**"Avatar also draws on a mix of Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Indian, Tibetan, Persian, Mongolian, and even Inuit philosophy, religion, language, clothing, martial arts and culture. " Where's the Inuit/Persian/Mongolian influence? The Chinese, Tibetan, etc. are all explained in the article but not the others. Where's the source for them?
:::That section has been cleaned up a bit.--[[User:Fyre2387|Fyre2387]] <sup>([[User talk:Fyre2387|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Fyre2387|contribs]])</sup> 19:47, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
**<s>"its intended 6-to-11-year-old demographic" Source?</s>
**"With consistently high ratings... Avatar is popular with both audiences and critics" I've mentioned the critics already, but what is the source for the ratings? [[User:Andrew Levine|Andrew Levine]] 00:57, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
***I don't know how to add sources. Someone tack this on: [http://www.tv.com/tracking/viewer.html?tid=8866&ref_id=28841&ref_type=101&tag=story_list;title;2][[User:Y BCZ|Y BCZ]] 17:14, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
****<nowiki><ref>{{cite web| url = |title = |accessdate= YYYY-MM-DD}}</ref></nowiki> is how you source webcites. If you have to use it more than once use <nowiki><ref name="insertnamehere"></nowiki> in place of <nowiki><ref></nowiki> the first time and then <nowiki><ref name="insertnamehere"/></nowiki> every other time. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 17:24, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
****see {{tl|cite web}} and [[WP:CITE]] for further details. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 17:38, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
****Much thanks, problem taken care of. [[User:Y BCZ|Y BCZ]] 17:47, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
*<s>'''Object''' - Lack of referencing in the first half of the article. Needs a better system of citing the episodes themselves if that is where all of this is coming from. [[User:Savidan|savidan]]<sup>[[User_talk:Savidan|(talk)]] [[Wikipedia:Esperanza|<span style="color:#008000;">(e@)</span>]]</sup> 09:16, 12 December 2006 (UTC)</s> Objection withdrawn&mdash;you may consider me neutral. [[User:Savidan|savidan]]<sup>[[User_talk:Savidan|(talk)]] [[Wikipedia:Esperanza|<span style="color:#008000;">(e@)</span>]]</sup> 20:31, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
**'''Comment''' The parts that you are talking about I assume are the plot summary and charchter descriptions. If that is your problem, please look at [[Arrested Development (TV series)]] and other T.V. related featured articles. As you will see, their are no refrences for carchters or plot their either. [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 13:55, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
***{{tl|cite episode}} is available if necessary, although I think the source in general is assumed in this case. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 18:54, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
**'''Comment''' I referenced the Plot Synopsis section. The other sections in Overview I will get too later.[[User:Parent5446|jeremybelpois]]<sup>([[User talk:Parent5446|Murder me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Parent5446|my actions]])</sup> 21:57, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
***'''Comment''' Finished the rest.[[User:Parent5446|jeremybelpois]]<sup>([[User talk:Parent5446|Murder me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Parent5446|my actions]])</sup> 21:57, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
*'''Comment''' Some of my objects have been resolved, while others still stand. The lack of good critical response is the biggest problem. Also, what is a "cine-manga"? [[User:Andrew Levine|Andrew Levine]] 05:59, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
*:Man, this is Wikipedia, look it up :-P. [[User:HeirToPendragon|H2P]] <sup>([[User_talk:HeirToPendragon|Yell at me]] for [[Special:Contributions/HeirToPendragon|what I've done]])</sup> 06:02, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
*::I did, but the page gives several definitions. [[User:Andrew Levine|Andrew Levine]] 06:23, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
** Wikilinked, if it helps in the slightest bit. [[User:Whydoit|Whydoit]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Whydoit|Why]]...[[Special:Contributions/Whydoit|do it?]])</sup> 06:11, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
**:See above. [[User:Andrew Levine|Andrew Levine]] 06:23, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
**::Good point. There is no definite article for that link, one would have to look at both the anime and manga articles to derive some sort of idea of what a cine-manga is. I agree this could be very confusing to those researching the article and come upon this, however anyone who researches a little in-depth won't have such problems. I myself have no idea what the heck it is either, by the way. The subject at-hand itself needs it's own article... [[User:Whydoit|Whydoit]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Whydoit|Why]]...[[Special:Contributions/Whydoit|do it?]])</sup> 06:32, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
**:::I think it's the second one. Haven't seen it though, unless the comic in the Avatar Magazine is a preview. As Why stated, the understanding of what it is really isn't our fault, we're just using the word they give us. [[User:HeirToPendragon|H2P]] <sup>([[User_talk:HeirToPendragon|Yell at me]] for [[Special:Contributions/HeirToPendragon|what I've done]])</sup> 06:58, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
**:::A cine-manga is where they take scenes from the episode and arrange them in a manga with captions. [[User:Cnriaczoy42|Cnriaczoy42]] 13:46, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
 
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*'''Object'''—1a. Would a "professionally" written nomination have the following bloopers in the lead?
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**"executively produced"—very awkward
**"outside of" (which one is redundant?)
**"best rated showing"—hyphenate the first two words
**"six-inch scale"—metric equivalent is ...?
**"and now a third season has been announced to begin airing in 2007." When is "now"? In two years' time, will it still be "now"? Replace "to being airing in" with just "for".
 
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The opening sentence is stop-startish: "Avatar: The Last Airbender (also known as Avatar: The Legend of Aang in several countries), an American animated television series, currently airs on the television network Nickelodeon." Make it: "Avatar: The Last Airbender (also known as Avatar: The Legend of Aang in several countries) is an American animated television series that currently airs on the television network Nickelodeon. [[User:Tony1|Tony]] 05:35, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
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:I guess I'll have a crack at it...[[User:Whydoit|Whydoit]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Whydoit|Why]]...[[Special:Contributions/Whydoit|do it?]])</sup> 06:56, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
birth = [[April 30]], [[1930]] ([[Villeneuve-les-Sablons]], [[Oise]], [[France]])|
::Done, even though I think the remedy I put for the "outside of" comment needs work. If anyone feels lke they can do better, feel free.[[User:Whydoit|Whydoit]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Whydoit|Why]]...[[Special:Contributions/Whydoit|do it?]])</sup> 07:22, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
death = [[August 29]], [[1992]] ([[La Borde clinic]], [[Cour-Cheverny]], [[France]])|
*'''Request''' I would like to know which of ANY objections on this page still stand. [[User:Parent5446|Parent5446]]<sup>([[User talk:Parent5446|Murder me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Parent5446|my actions]])</sup> 20:20, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
school_tradition = [[Psychoanalysis]], [[Autonomism]] |
**The map of the four nations still needs a fair use rationale. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 20:45, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
main_interests = [[Psychoanalysis]], [[Politics]], [[Ecology]], [[Semiotics]]|
*** '''Comment''' Added fair use rationale to map image. Anything else? [[User:Parent5446|Parent5446]]<sup>([[User talk:Parent5446|Murder me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Parent5446|my actions]])</sup> 00:09, 18 December 2006 (UTC)
influences = [[Freud]], [[Lacan]], [[Gregory Bateson|Bateson]], [[Sartre]], [[Hjelmslev]]|
**** Parent it's not going to be as easy as completing a list of complaints and then getting the nomination. [[User:HeirToPendragon|H2P]] <sup>([[User_talk:HeirToPendragon|Yell at me]] for [[Special:Contributions/HeirToPendragon|what I've done]])</sup> 00:33, 18 December 2006 (UTC)
influenced = [[Eric Alliez]], [[Michael Hardt]], [[Brian Massumi]], [[Antonio Negri]] |
***** I know that. The page was just getting a little too long for me to take in all at once. In addition, some of the objections have been fixed and since they have not been struck out, I wanted to find out what objections people still had against the article. [[User:Parent5446|Parent5446]]<sup>([[User talk:Parent5446|Murder me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Parent5446|my actions]])</sup> 01:06, 18 December 2006 (UTC)
notable_ideas = [[assemblage]], [[desiring machine]], [[deterritorialization]], [[ecosophy]], [[schizoanalysis]]|
*'''Support''' per Stretchyrubberbands. '''[[User:Sharkface217|<span style="background:black;color:red">S h a r k </span>]][[User talk:Sharkface217|<span style="background:black;color:red">f a c e </span>]][[Special:Contributions/Sharkface217|<span style="background:black;color:red">2 1 7 </span>]]''' 07:06, 18 December 2006 (UTC)
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:* Let it be known that any vote that doesn't give a reason for it's vote, whether it be support or oppose, should not be counted as anything meaningful. I am so sick of lazy people putting "per X" when X's comment above has been modified in the article but not changed on this vote page. [[User:HeirToPendragon|H2P]] <sup>([[User_talk:HeirToPendragon|Yell at me]] for [[Special:Contributions/HeirToPendragon|what I've done]])</sup> 08:17, 18 December 2006 (UTC)
'''Pierre-Félix Guattari''' ([[April 30]], [[1930]] – [[August 29]], [[1992]]) was a [[France|French]] [[militant]], institutional [[psychotherapist]] and [[philosopher]], a founder of both [[schizoanalysis]] and [[ecosophy]]. Guattari is best known for his intellectual collaborations with [[Gilles Deleuze]], most notably ''[[Anti-Oedipus]]'' (1972) and ''[[A Thousand Plateaus]]'' (1980).
 
==Biography==
*Please note: it's = it is. There are a lot of these floating around at the moment. I've been asked to review my object that was on the basis of 1a. I've skimmed through the article at random, and am disappointed to easily find a high density of obvious shortcomings, such as:
=== Clinic of La Borde ===
**"Like most animated series in recent times, it is animated in South Korea." Problems with the use of present tense (including at the start of "Creation") to refer to something that ''was'' created two years ago. Also, make it clear that the animation is not ''set'' in recent times: "Like most animated series produced recently".
Born in Villeneuve-les-Sablons, [[Oise]], [[France]].{{Fact|date=February 2007}} Guattari was encouraged by psychiatrist [[Jean Oury]] towards the practice of [[psychiatry]], becoming impassioned from 1950 towards that field.{{Fact|date=February 2007}} Due to his frustrations with the theories and methods of French [[psychoanalyst]] [[Jacques Lacan]] — who both taught and analysed Guattari in the 1950s – Guattari became convinced that he needed to continue exploring as vast an array of domains as possible ([[philosophy]], [[ethnology]], [[linguistics]], [[architecture]], etc.,) in order to better define the orientation, delimitation and psychiatric efficacy of the practice. Guattari would later proclaim that psychoanalysis is "the best [[capitalist]] drug" because in it desire is confined to a couch: desire, in Lacanian psychoanalysis, is an energy that is contained rather than one that, if freed, could militantly engage itself in something different. He continued this research, collaborating in Jean Oury's private clinic of [[La Borde clinic|La Borde]] at Court-Cheverny, one of the main centers of institutional psychotherapy at the time. La Borde was a venue for conversation amongst innumerable students of philosophy, psychology, ethnology, and [[social work]]. La Borde was Félix Guattari's principal anchoring until he died of a heart attack in [[1992]].
**"Avatar took six years to go from an idea to a completed first episode, longer than normally expected." Just "longer than normal" will do. There's redundant wording throughout, which needs to be weeded out by someone who's unfamiliar with the text. Here's another, in the very next sentence: "the series was originally set to air at some point in November of 2004"—No, remove "at some point". "Move" would be nicer that "go".
**And the sentence after that is "Airing of new episodes occur Friday at 8:00 Eastern Standard Time, while airing of reruns occur on weekday evenings." Nope, "THE airing", once only please, not twice. OccurS, not occur. You ellide "on" first, then include it. Does EST refer to the US? If so, say so, because there are lots of other ESTs around the world. And I think you mean FridayS. And why not say "New episodes are first aired on Fridays at 8pm ...." Your 8:00 could mean 8am in 24-hour code. Friday evening IS a weekday evening, or at the least is ambiguous. Too many "airings" in that section.
 
=== 1960s to 1970s ===
This suggests that the whole text has still not been copy-edited to the required "professional" standard. [[User:Tony1|Tony]] 13:26, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
 
*I've reworded a bunch of the sections now. Man, the grammar in that paragraph you pointed out was...god-awful. I can't believe I didn't notice it before. [[User:Y BCZ|Y BCZ]] 18:39, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
From 1955 to 1965, Félix Guattari animated the [[trotskyist]] group ''Voie Communiste'' ("Communist Way"). He would then support [[anticolonialist]] struggles as well as the Italian ''[[Autonomists]]''. Guattari also took part in the movement of the psychological G.T., which gathered many psychiatrists at the beginning of the sixties and created the Association of Institutional Psychotherapy in November [[1965]]. It was at the same time that he founded, along with other militants, the F.G.E.R.I. (Federation of Groups for Institutional Study & Research) and its review research, working on philosophy, mathematics, psychoanalysis, education, architecture, ethnology, etc. The F.G.E.R.I. came to represent aspects of the multiple political and cultural engagements of Félix Guattari: the Group for Young Hispanics, the Franco-Chinese Friendships (in the times of the popular communes), the opposition activities with the wars in [[Algerian War of Independence|Algeria]] and Vietnam, the participation in the M.N.E.F., with the U.N.E.F., the policy of the offices of psychological academic aid (B.A.P.U.), the organisation of the University Working Groups (G.T.U.), but also the reorganizations of the training courses with the Centers of Training to the Methods of Education Activities (C.E.M.E.A.) for psychiatric male nurses, as well as the formation of Friendly Male Nurses (Amicales d'infirmiers) (in [[1958]]), the studies on architecture and the projects of construction of a day hospital of for "students and young workers".
 
Guattari was involved in the [[events of May 1968]], starting from the [[Movement of March 22]]. It was in the aftermath of 1968 that Guattari met [[Gilles Deleuze]] at the [[University of Vincennes]] and began to lay the ground-work for the soon to be infamous ''[[Anti-Oedipus]]'' (1972), which [[Michel Foucault]] described as "an introduction to the non-fascist life" in his preface to the book. Throughout his career it may be said that his writings were at all times correspondent in one fashion or another with sociopolitical and cultural engagements. In 1967, he appeared as one of the founders of OSARLA (Organization of solidarity and Aid to the Latin-American Revolution). It was with the head office of the F.G.E.R.I. that he met, in [[1968]], [[Daniel Cohn-Bendit]], [[Jean-Jacques Lebel]], and [[Julian Beck]]. In [[1970]], he created C.E.R.F.I. (Center for the Study and Research of Institutional Formation), which takes the direction of the Recherches review. In 1977, he created the CINEL for "new spaces of freedom" before joining in the 1980s the [[ecological]] movement with his "[[ecosophy]]".
 
=== 1980s to 1990s ===
 
In his last book, ''Chaosmose'' ([[1992]]), the topic of which is already partially developed in ''What is Philosophy?'' (1991, with Deleuze), Félix Guattari takes again his essential topic: the question of subjectivity. "How to produce it, collect it, enrich it, reinvent it permanently in order to make it compatible with mutant Universes of value?" This idea returns like a leitmotiv, from ''Psychanalyse and transversality'' (a regrouping of articles from [[1957]] to [[1972]]) through ''Années d'hiver'' ([[1980]] - [[1986]]) and ''Cartographies Schizoanalytique'' ([[1989]]). He insists on the function of "a-signification", which plays the role of support for a subjectivity in act, starting from four parameters: "significative and [[semiotic]] flows, Phylum of Machinic Propositions, Existential Territories and Incorporeal Universes of Reference."
 
In 1995, the posthumous release ''Chaosophy'' featured Guattari's first collection of essays and interviews focuses on the French anti-psychiatrist and theorist's work as director of the experimental La Borde clinic and collaborator of philosopher Gilles Deleuze. ''Chaosophy'' is a groundbreaking introduction to Guattari's theories on "schizo-analysis", a process meant to replace [[Sigmund Freud]]'s interpretation with a more pragmatic, experimental, and collective approach rooted in reality. Unlike Freud, Guattari believes that [[schizophrenia]] is an extreme mental state co-existent with the capitalist system itself. But capitalism keeps enforcing [[neurosis]] as a way of maintaining normality. Guattari's post-Marxist vision of capitalism provides a new definition not only of mental illness, but also of micropolitical means of subversion. It includes key essays such as "Balance-Sheet Program for Desiring Machines," cosigned by Deleuze (with whom he coauthored Anti-Oedipus and A Thousand Plateaus), and the provocative "Everybody Wants To Be a Fascist."
 
''Soft Subversions'' is another collection of Félix Guattari's essays, lectures, and interviews traces the militant anti-psychiatrist and theorist's thought and activity throughout the 1980s ("the winter years"). Concepts such as "micropolitics," "schizoanalysis," and "becoming-woman" open up new horizons for political and creative resistance in the "postmedia era." Guattari's energetic analyses of art, cinema, youth culture, economics, and power formations introduce a radically inventive thought process engaged in liberating subjectivity from the standardizing and homogenizing processes of global capitalism.
 
== Bibliography ==
=== Works published in English ===
 
*''Molecular Revolution: Psychiatry and Politics'' (1984). Trans. Rosemary Sheed. Selected essays from ''Psychanalyse et transversalité'' (1972) and ''La révolution moléculaire'' (1977).
*''Les Trois écologies'' (1989). Trans. ''The Three Ecologies.'' Partial translation by Chris Turner (Paris: Galilee, 1989), full translation by Ian Pindar and Paul Sutton (London: The Athlone Press, 2000).
*''Chaosmose'' (1992). Trans. ''Chaosmosis: an ethico-aesthetic paradigm'' (1995).
*''Chaosophy'' (1995), ed. Sylvere Lotringer. Collected essays and interviews.
*''Soft Subversions'' (1996), ed. Sylvere Lotringer. Collected essays and interviews.
*''The Guattari Reader'' (1996), ed. Gary Genosko. Collected essays and interviews.
*''Ecrits pour L'Anti-Œdipe'' (2004), ed. Stéphane Nadaud. Trans. ''The Anti-Œdipus Papers'' (2006). Collection of texts written between 1969 and 1972.
*''Chaos and Complexity'' (Forthcoming 2008, MIT Press). Collected essays and interviews.
 
In collaboration with [[Gilles Deleuze]]:
 
*''Capitalisme et Schizophrénie 1. L'Anti-Œdipe'' (1972). Trans. ''[[Anti-Oedipus]]'' (1977).
*''Kafka: Pour une Littérature Mineure'' (1975). Trans. ''Kafka: Toward a Theory of Minor Literature'' (1986).
*''Rhizome: introduction'' (Paris: Minuit, 1976). Trans. "Rhizome," in ''Ideology and Consciousness'' 8 (Spring, 1981): 49-71. This is an early version of what became the introductory chapter in ''Mille Plateaux.''
*''Capitalisme et Schizophrénie 2. Mille Plateaux'' (1980). Trans. ''[[A Thousand Plateaus]]'' (1987).
*''On the Line'' (1983). Contains translations of "Rhizome," and "Politics" ("Many Politics") by Deleuze and Parnet.
*''Nomadology: The War Machine.'' (1986). Translation of "Plateau 12," ''Mille Plateaux.''
*''Qu'est-ce que la philosophie?'' (1991). Trans. ''What Is Philosophy?'' (1996).
 
Other collaborations:
 
*''Les nouveaux espaces de liberté'' (1985). Trans. ''Communists Like Us'' (1990). With [[Antonio Negri]].
*''Micropolitica: Cartografias do Desejo'' (1986). Trans. ''Molecular Revolution in Brazil'' (Forthcoming October 2007, MIT Press). With Suely Rolnik.
*''The party without bosses'' (2003), by Gary Genosko. Features a 1982 conversation between Guattari and [[Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva]], the current [[President of Brazil]].
 
=== Works untranslated into English ===
Note: Many of the essays found in these works have been individually translated and can be found in the English collections.
*''Psychanalyse et transversalité. Essais d'analyse institutionnelle'' (1972).
*''La révolution moléculaire'' (1977, 1980). The 1980 version (éditions 10/18) contains substantially different essays from the 1977 version.
*''L'inconscient machinique. Essais de Schizoanalyse'' (1979).
*''Les années d'hiver, 1980-1985'' (1986).
*''Cartographies schizoanalytiques'' (1989).
 
Other collaborations:
 
*''L’intervention institutionnelle'' (Paris: Petite Bibliothèque Payot, n. 382 - 1980). On [[institutional pedagogy]]. With Jacques Ardoino, G. Lapassade, Gerard Mendel, Rene Lourau.
*''Pratique de l'institutionnel et politique'' (1985). With [[Jean Oury]] and Francois Tosquelles.
*(it) ''Desiderio e rivoluzione. Intervista a cura di Paolo Bertetto'' (Milan: Squilibri, 1977). Conversation with Franco Berardi (Bifo) and Paolo Bertetto.
 
=== Select secondary sources ===
 
*[[Éric Alliez]], ''La Signature du monde, ou Qu'est-ce que la philosophie de Deleuze et Guattari'' (1993). Trans. ''The Signature of the World: Or, What is Deleuze and Guattari's Philosophy?'' (2005).
*Gary Genosko, ''Félix Guattari: An Aberrant Introduction'' (2002).
*Gary Genosko (ed.), ''Deleuze and Guattari: Critical Assessments of Leading Philosophers, Volume 2: Guattari'' (2001).
 
==External links==
*[http://www.revue-chimeres.org/guattari/guattari.html Chimeres site on Guattari (in French)]
*[http://multitudes.samizdat.net/_Guattari-Felix_.html Multitudes page on Guattari (in French)]
 
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