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=== [[Korean War]] ===

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I have been editing this article for a few days. I ran down through the article and fixed any grammer mistakes I could find. I would appreciate any suggestions on what to do and how I can really improve it further. Thanks a lot. [[User:Mr. Killigan|Mr. Killigan]] 06:17, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

==== Kirill Lokshin ====

{{Infobox Album <!-- See Wikipedia:WikiProject_Albums -->

| Name = Incognegro

| Type = studio

| Artist = Ludacris

| Cover = Incognegro_cover.jpg‎

| Cover size = 130

| Released = [[May 16]], [[2000]]

| Recorded =

| Genre = Hip-Hop/Rap

| Length = ???

| Label = Disturbing the Peace

| Producer =

| Reviews =

| Last album =

| This album = Incognegro <br />(2000)

| Next album = [[Back for the First Time]]<br />(2000)

}}

'''''Incognegro''''' was an independent album (ASIN: B00004THJ6) put out by [[Ludacris]] before signing with [[Def Jam Recordings|Def Jam]] Records. Reportedly only selling 300,000 copies most of the tracks were reused in his major label debut [[Back for the First Time]]

There are a number of areas to work on, at this point; keep in mind, though, that this is a very high-profile article, so you should be careful to move slowly and carefully to avoid getting entangled in any editorial conflicts here.

== Track Listing ==

* <s>The article is, in my opinion, simply too long; we're looking at 72K (~12,000 words) of prose. The "Legacy" section, in particular, is ripe for splitting out into a separate [[Legacy of the Korean War]] article, with a much shorter summary left in the main one.</s>

# Intro

* <s>"Korean War (1950 – 1953)" should really be something like "Course of the war"; you probably don't want to repeat the article title as a section heading.</s>

# U Got a Problem?

* The citations need cleanup; at a minimum, all of the embedded external links should be converted to footnotes. There are also a number of "citation needed" tags floating around. Beyond that, more thorough citation would be appropriate throughout the article; see [[WP:MILHIST#CITE]] for some guidelines.

# Game Got Switched

* <s>The "Depictions" section should be turned into prose, rather than a laundry list of films; see also [[WP:MILHIST#POP]].</s>

# 1st & 10

* <s>The "Names" section, as it's presently constituted, would work much better as a narrow sidebar; it's of some interest, but I doubt there's enough material to sustain a separate section.</s>

# It Wasn't Us

* <s>The "See also" section should be eliminated. If something isn't worth linking from the text, it's generally not worth linking at all. </s>

# Come on Over (Skit)

* <s>The rump "Bibliography" section should be removed as well.</s>

# Hood Stuck

* The "External links" section could use trimming.

# Get Off Me

Hope that helps! [[User:Kirill Lokshin|Kirill]] 04:08, 13 July 2007 (UTC)<s>cool</s>

# Mouthing Off

# Midnight Train

# Ho (Skit)

# Ho

# Tickets Sold Out (Skit)

# Catch Up

# What's Your Fantasy - Ludacris, Shawnna

# Rock and a Hard Place

::Thank you very much for offering your opinion! [[User:Mr. Killigan|Mr. Killigan]] 00:57, 14 July 2007 (UTC)

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