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=== [[Korean War]] ===
{{Football player infobox| playername= Park Chu-Young
I have been editing this article for a few days. I ran down through the article and fixed any grammer mistakes I could find. I would appreciate any suggestions on what to do and how I can really improve it further. Thanks a lot. [[User:Mr. Killigan|Mr. Killigan]] 06:17, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
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| dateofbirth = [[July 10]], [[1985]]
| cityofbirth = [[Daegu]]
| countryofbirth = [[South Korea ]]
| height = 1.82 m
| weight = 70 kg
| maritalstatus = single
| hobbies = computer
| currentclub = [[FC Seoul]]
| position = [[Striker|Forward]]
| youthyears = 2004
| youthclubs = [[Korea University]]
| years = 2005-
| clubs = [[FC Seoul]]
| caps(goals) = 19 (12)
| nationalyears = [[2005]]-
| nationalteam = [[South Korea national football team|South Korea]]
| nationalcaps(goals) = 20 (7)
| pcupdate = [[1 May]][[2006]]
| ntupdate = [[23 June]][[2006]]
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==== Kirill Lokshin ====
'''Park Chu-Young''' (박주영 ''Park Chu-young'', born [[July 10]], [[1985]]) is a [[South Korea|South Korean]] [[football (soccer)|footballer]] who was awarded the "AFC Young Player of the Year" by the [[Asian Football Confederation]] (AFC) in 2004. He plays as a [[striker]] with [[FC Seoul]].
There are a number of areas to work on, at this point; keep in mind, though, that this is a very high-profile article, so you should be careful to move slowly and carefully to avoid getting entangled in any editorial conflicts here.
Park Chu-young's immense fame with the Korean public was sparked by his stellar performance at the 2004 Asia Youth Championships where he led the U-20 Korean national team to a record-breaking 11th title. In the process, he swept the Golden Ball Award, MVP of the finals, and the Most Valuable Player of the tournament. He was also [[cap (football)|capped]] for the South Korean U-20 team at the [[2003 FIFA World Youth Championship]].
* <s>The article is, in my opinion, simply too long; we're looking at 72K (~12,000 words) of prose. The "Legacy" section, in particular, is ripe for splitting out into a separate [[Legacy of the Korean War]] article, with a much shorter summary left in the main one.</s>
* <s>"Korean War (1950 – 1953)" should really be something like "Course of the war"; you probably don't want to repeat the article title as a section heading.</s>
* The citations need cleanup; at a minimum, all of the embedded external links should be converted to footnotes. There are also a number of "citation needed" tags floating around. Beyond that, more thorough citation would be appropriate throughout the article; see [[WP:MILHIST#CITE]] for some guidelines.
* <s>The "Depictions" section should be turned into prose, rather than a laundry list of films; see also [[WP:MILHIST#POP]].</s>
* <s>The "Names" section, as it's presently constituted, would work much better as a narrow sidebar; it's of some interest, but I doubt there's enough material to sustain a separate section.</s>
* <s>The "See also" section should be eliminated. If something isn't worth linking from the text, it's generally not worth linking at all. </s>
* <s>The rump "Bibliography" section should be removed as well.</s>
* The "External links" section could use trimming.
Hope that helps! [[User:Kirill Lokshin|Kirill]] 04:08, 13 July 2007 (UTC)<s>cool</s>
::Thank you very much for offering your opinion! [[User:Mr. Killigan|Mr. Killigan]] 00:57, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
The country's "Park Chu-young" hysteria grew even more wildly when Korea's U-20 squad participated in the Qatar eight-team invitational in January 2005. Scoring nine goals in four games, Park had two against China, three against Ukraine, two against Algeria, and two against Japan as Korea won the tournament.
The Korean national team and its fans, known also as the Red Devils, gave Park the nickname of "football genius" due to his outstanding dribbling and shots, along with his notably high 150 IQ. Fans say he's one of the best players on the team.
Park's first season with [[FC Seoul]] was very successful, becoming Korean league's best young player and holding the title of best scorer in his first professional season career. Though he has publicly stated his wish to play in the [[English Premier League]]. But his meager playing time and unimpressive performance in the 2006 World Cup have hurt his stock, and it seems European teams have put Park off their radar for now.{{fact}}
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{{succession box|title=[[Asian Young Footballer of the Year]]|before={{flagicon|Japan}} [[Yoshito Okubo]] |after={{flagicon|North Korea}} [[Choe Myong-Ho]]|years=2004}}
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{{South Korea Squad 2006 World Cup}}
{{FC Seoul Squad}}
[[Category:South Korean footballers|Park, Chu-young]]
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