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==[[Foundry (electronics)model]]==

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''Added to [[User:Computerjoe/Desk]]'' [[User:RJFJR|RJFJR]] 17:10, 15 February 2006 (UTC)

''Added to [[User:RJFJR/Desk]] in parallel.''

''Added to [[User:Canderson7/Desk]]'' [[User:Computerjoe|<span style="color:black">Compu</span>]][[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">terjoe</span>]] 20:40, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

''Added to [[User:Phroziac/Desk]]. [[User:Computerjoe|<span style="color:black">Compu</span>]][[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">terjoe</span>]] 21:14, 11 March 2006 (UTC)''

''Added to [[User:Xchrisblackx/Desk]]. [[User:Computerjoe|Computerjoe]][[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">'s talk</span>]] 16:39, 4 April 2006 (UTC)''

It now has a intro paragraph (about what a foundry is).

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A few further changes in the first 5/6 history paragraphs. [[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:black">Compu</span>]][[User:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">terjoe</span>]] 14:13, 27 February 2006 (UTC)

I took the first section an older version of this article and put it at [[Foundry (electronics)]] and made the redirect to foundry model a part of see also, and marked it tech-stub.

I added an overview section above history, I think it makes sense. I deleted the clean room section (it's now at foundry (electronics) anyways).

I've been fleshing out some of the parts we've been tightening. Hopefully the tension between tightening and expanding will result in good paragraphs. [[User:RJFJR|RJFJR]] 21:31, 28 February 2006 (UTC)

I've changed it a little so foundry (electronics) is linked. [[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:black">Compu</span>]][[User:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">terjoe</span>]] 08:18, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

I've changed the tone of the paragraph. This is a hefty job and I might assign someone else. [[User:Computerjoe|<span style="color:black">Compu</span>]][[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">terjoe</span>]] 20:37, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

I've changed the first paragraph of history, again! [[User:Computerjoe|<span style="color:black">Compu</span>]][[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">terjoe</span>]] 21:10, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

I fixed some grammar and spelling, then I dropped it in Word and the runtime spell checker found more. I also finally did a rewrite on the sentece about EDA so it would agree in number. [[User:RJFJR|RJFJR]] 23:15, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

There are a number of technical terms related to chip manufacture (including photomask, wafer, etc). We could wikilink if that would make it more accessible but it might be better to rewrite to void these complexities. [[User:RJFJR|RJFJR]] 23:15, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

:I agree that the large number of technical terms makes it difficult to read through the article. I've wikilinked a few of them, but it might be more desirable to explain them somewhat in the body of the article itself. [[User:Canderson7|Canderson7]] ^{([[User_talk:Canderson7|talk]])} 03:51, 21 March 2006 (UTC)

''low-quantity shuttle-services in addition to full production-lines'' We need to define shuttle-services if we are going to leave it in. [[User:RJFJR|RJFJR]] 17:11, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

I've added an external link. [[User:Computerjoe|Computerjoe]][[User talk:Computerjoe|<span style="color:red">'s talk</span>]] 13:58, 28 March 2006 (UTC)

Closing. [[User:RJFJR|RJFJR]] 15:36, 19 June 2006 (UTC)