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|fr|Costume du monde antique|Clothing in the ancient world|
|Interest=good article, topic not covered in the English-language wikipedia. leave it to the french to have much better fashion coverage!
|Comment=not sure what the best translation for "costume" would be in the title... dress? clothing? attire? they also discuss perfume and cosmetics.
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== Talk ==
 
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I'd suggest using something like "Clothing/Fashion (whatever) in the Ancient Mediterranean World" - rather than "Ancient World", if the article is to cover the same ground as the French one. I'm not sure how it sounds in French, but I would expect "...in the Ancient World" to include Rome, Greece etc, and no doubt others would want China etc covered. We have articles on Rome & Greece already. I hope I've put this in the right place! [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] 01:16, 15 March 2007 (UTC)
 
A bit I'm stuck on but have had a go at:
 
{{Doubt | écharpe enroulée autour des reins et retenue à la taille par une ceinture | scarf round the waist similar to a belt}}
 
I think that would be the loincloth?
 
{{Doubt | Les hommes portent un pagne, le shenti, écharpe enroulée autour des reins et retenue à la taille par une ceinture | Men wore a [[loincloth]] (called a shenti)}}
 
I've changed this in the article.
 
With respect to the suggested name change, the Ancient Mediterranean World would certainly be expected to cover Rome and Greece!
 
[[User:60.242.240.24|60.242.240.24]] 12:13, 22 October 2007 (UTC)Jac
 
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