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== Opening vs. ending credits ==
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* "the high-spirited Catriona Potts". [[WP:POV]] wording.
* "talk Joan into her senses", "Catriona piques him", "elderly dame"? Weird, unidiomatic wording.
* "Torquil drats all"? What English dialect is that from?
[[User:Clarityfiend|Clarityfiend]] ([[User talk:Clarityfiend|talk]]) 07:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC) :Since the original goal seems to have been to get the plot section down to a reasonable length, I've taken my own stab at shortening it. Hopefully this will resolve the issue. [[User:InspectorMendel|InspectorMendel]] ([[User talk:InspectorMendel|talk]]) 10:15, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
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