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: Looks delicious, thanks! '''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''' ([[User:ProgrammingGeek|Page!]] • [[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|Talk!]] • [[Special:Contributions/ProgrammingGeek|Contribs!]]) 16:23, 19 December 2016 (UTC)
 
== 10:47:12, 19 December 2016 review of submission by Carlomagno4 ==
{{Lafc|username=Carlomagno4|ts=10:47:12, 19 December 2016|declined=Draft:JadoPado}}
 
 
 
Hi ProgrammingGeek
 
Thanks for reviewing my article. Can you please guide me and let me know more details on why my article about JadoPado has been rejected? will be great help so i can fix it and submit it again.
Thanks a lot in advance.
Regards
 
== 18:36:22, 19 December 2016 review of submission by Oldyorke ==
{{Lafc|username=Oldyorke|ts=18:36:22, 19 December 2016|declined=Draft:The_Unknown_Woman_(Rahway_1887)}}
 
Hi there - check out these new sources - this story was covered heavily in both the contemporary press and recent published literature - let me know thoughts!
 
== 13:23:53, 5 January 2017 review of submission by SunSetter ==
{{Lafc|username=SunSetter|ts=13:23:53, 5 January 2017|declined=Draft:Carbon_Tracker_Initiative}}
 
Thank you for reviewing my submission. I must say that I am surprised at the rejection, given that all the main sources cited to establish the notability of the organisation are external & independent - notably Reuters, the Financial Times and the Guardian. They are not references to Carbon Tracker's own website (which are mostly links to the pieces of research cited)
 
As such, could you kindly explain which parts read like an advertisement? Please note that the Bill McKibben reference on number of shares & likes is taken from another Wikipedia page. Upon rereading, perhaps some of the historical bits of the organisation could be trimmed down, but other than that, I genuinely am puzzled.
 
Many thanks and happy new year!
 
== Re: Bio-Cancer draft ==
 
What is still needed for the [[Draft:Bio-Cancer|Bio-Cancer draft]]? I took charge of that draft after it was submitted by a new editor, who I believe has left the project since March. I fail to see what is now keeping this article from being created - there are six independent reliable sources that discuss the band in detail. There are two paragraphs on content. If I'd created this article directly, instead of going through AfC, I wouldn't see it nominated for deletion. Can you please explain exactly what the problem is?--[[User:3family6|<fontspan colorstyle="color:navy;">'''3family6'''</fontspan>]] ([[User talk:3family6|<fontspan colorstyle="color:black;"><u>Talk to me</u></fontspan>]] &#124; <small>[[Special:Contributions/3family6|<fontspan colorstyle="color:purple;">See what I have done</fontspan>]]</small>) 15:18, 19 December 2016 (UTC)
: The page is create-protected. Please file a request to unprotect it at [[WP:RFPP]]. '''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''' ([[User:ProgrammingGeek|Page!]] • [[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|Talk!]] • [[Special:Contributions/ProgrammingGeek|Contribs!]]) 16:04, 19 December 2016 (UTC)
::Thanks. I might also try moving it to a userspace draft. I feel responsible for this article, as I worked at mentoring the editor who submitted it.--[[User:3family6|<fontspan colorstyle="color:navy;">'''3family6'''</fontspan>]] ([[User talk:3family6|<fontspan colorstyle="color:black;"><u>Talk to me</u></fontspan>]] &#124; <small>[[Special:Contributions/3family6|<fontspan colorstyle="color:purple;">See what I have done</fontspan>]]</small>) 19:39, 19 December 2016 (UTC)
 
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== 05:58:34, 23 December 2016 review of submission by Hexjo ==
{{Lafc|username=Hexjo|ts=05:58:34, 23 December 2016|declined=Draft:Hartek_Group}}
 
Hi, Thanks for reviewing my article, but i have submitted all the reliable sources and content ,all the information is verifiable and accurate then why my submission is declined .please help me to get out of this.
 
{{ping|Hexjo}}
Hi, I removed some [[WP:AD|advertising]] from your article. Please feel free to re-submit it. Thanks [[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 06:11, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
 
== 15:14:35, 21 December 2016 review of submission by Alphanumeric12345 ==
{{Lafc|username=Alphanumeric12345|ts=15:14:35, 21 December 2016|declined=Draft:The_Evangelical_Network_(TEN)}}
 
 
Hi there -- Thank you in advance for your help. Just wanting some direction on how to edit and adjust the article to not read like an advertisement. I had even done some "live chat help" before submitting, so I was a little surprised to have the submission declined. You mentioned needing a range of independent sources, which was one of the things I tried very hard to do - in fact only twice did I refer to the organization's own website and listed several outside links to articles or stories to show supportive material references. Please know I'm not sharing any of that to argue or complain, just simply explaining why I need some guidance because I'm not sure how to proceed.
 
In preparing the article, I also referred to several other Wikipedia articles on churches, denominations, religious groups and fellowships in order to see the manner in which they were written. I patterned much of my sentence structure and topics after what I read on these approved pages.
 
If you can provide some specific direction or suggestions, I will be sure to follow those completely and begin the resubmission process as soon as possible.
 
Thank you for your time and extra help! :)
Peace,
Alphanumeric12345
[[User:Alphanumeric12345|Alphanumeric12345]] ([[User talk:Alphanumeric12345|talk]]) 15:14, 21 December 2016 (UTC)
 
{{ping|Alphanumeric12345}}
 
Hey! First, let me say that your article is good. Very well written, after re-reading it I would say that my only concern is the coverage in mainstream media. Try searching Google News for coverage in CNN, NYT, etc. That would establish notability better. If I'm being completely honest I'm somewhat new to AFC, and if you re-submitted now it might be approved. That being said, another source never hurt.
 
Best of luck
[[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 18:20, 21 December 2016 (UTC)
 
Hi again - Thanks for your help. I found a couple of link/references I can include from NYT and HuffPost, so I'll add those and resubmit. Appreciate the assist. :)
Peace,
 
[[User:Alphanumeric12345|Alphanumeric12345]] ([[User talk:Alphanumeric12345|talk]]) 16:33, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
 
== 02:58:50, 24 December 2016 review of submission by BuVaSh ==
{{Lafc|username=BuVaSh|ts=02:58:50, 24 December 2016|declined=Draft:Pavel_Fedotov_(MMA/Muay_Thai_Trainer)}}
 
 
 
 
-->}} Hello dear friends, Iam asking a help with the page , that I created about Muaythai coach Pavel Fedotov. He is the personal coach of ufc fighter Valentina Shevchenko and Lion Fight Chamoion Antonina Shevchenko. He is being in martial arts all his life. And I am really dont understand why my page was declined? Maybe you can help me with this. Thank you 02:58, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
 
== Merry Christmas! ==
 
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[[User:Redolta|Redolta]] is wishing you a [[Mary Poppins|Merry]] [[Christmas]]! This greeting (and season) promotes [[Wikipedia:WikiLove|WikiLove]] and hopefully this note has made your day a little better. Spread the WikiLove by wishing another user a [[Christmas|Merry Christmas]], whether it be someone you have had disagreements with in the past, a good friend, or just some random person. Happy New Year! <br />
 
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== Tokai Park Draft Article ==
 
Dear ProgrammingGeek,
 
Could you please explain why you rejected our submission for a page on Tokai ([[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Tokai_Park]])? You said it "read more like an essay", but I've read other wiki pages and they are not significantly different in style. The sources that we use are "secondary, reliable sources". And additionally why is it a problem to use original research? Surely these are the best references to use. I am totally new to this and find all the new information rather overwhelming.
 
Also, I see you more recently declared that we have a "conflict of interest". I have read the page and still do not understand what wikipedia mean by "conflict of interest".
Nor why you have said that we (the co-authors for Tokai Park) have a conflict of interest. Could you please clarify?
 
Tokai Park is an important nature reserve and conservation area and there should be a wiki page for it. I cannot believe that Tokai suburb (the neighboring suburb) has a wikipedia page, and this is just an urban area (totally uninteresting), and yet we cannot get a page published on a notable area!? This is so strange to me and this all seems like nitpicking. Especially when all the other parks in Cape Town (South Africa) have wiki pages, and the Tokai one is already listed, and needing to be created (see here: [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cape_Flats_Sand_Fynbos]]).
 
Apologies for being frustrated with you, but honestly: I'm giving up my own free time to write about this conservation area -because I'm passionate about conservation. And now my writing is rejected for a whole bunch of reasons that are totally unclear? I really don't have a lot of time, and I would prefer to have clear guidance on how I can get this page published, rather than general and vague comments like "style is wrong" and "conflict of interest present" etc. I would really appreciate some clarity.
 
Yours sincerely,
 
Alanna
 
[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Tokai_Park]]
--[[User:Arebelo|Arebelo]] ([[User talk:Arebelo|talk]]) 16:09, 2 January 2017 (UTC)
 
== A barnstar for you! ==
 
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|style="vertical-align: middle; padding: 3px;" | Thank you very for reviewing the WonderCMS draft. We actually now have a way better understanding of what is necessary to have our project submitted.
 
We will stop re-submitting the article as it is futile for now as we'll let somebody else write the required links once they exist.
 
Do you mind answering one more question, how did these get submitted with less links/resources?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GetSimple_CMS
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CMSimple (book doesn't exist)
It just seems we went the extra mile to collect more information like our CMS friends - just to get it denied.
 
Thank you for your dedicated time towards making Wikipedia a great place.
 
Kind regards,
the WonderCMS team [[User:Robertisoski|Robertisoski]] ([[User talk:Robertisoski|talk]]) 13:40, 5 January 2017 (UTC)
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== Request on 23:22:11, 5 January 2017 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by ELP123 ==
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{{Lafc|username=ELP123|ts=23:22:11, 5 January 2017|declinedtalk=Draft:Faculty_Management_&_Productions}}
 
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Hi there,
 
I would like some more insight as to why my page was declined. I have used only reliable sources - Billboard, The Hollywood Reporter, etc. Can you please provide me some more information on which sections and sources are not verifiable.
 
Thanks!
 
[[User:ELP123|ELP123]] ([[User talk:ELP123|talk]]) 23:22, 5 January 2017 (UTC)
 
<!-- End of message -->[[User:ELP123|ELP123]] ([[User talk:ELP123|talk]]) 23:22, 5 January 2017 (UTC)
 
== Tolson Museum page edit ==
 
Hi ProgrammingGeek,
 
I updated the web link on the Tolson Museum page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tolson_Museum) because it was broken.
 
The broken link is http://www.kirklees.gov.uk/leisure/museumsGalleries/tolson/index.aspx
 
The new link is http://www.kirklees.gov.uk/beta/museums-galleries-history/tolson-museum.aspx
 
However, your implementation of Huggle reversed the change. Do I do something incorrect?
 
Many thanks,
 
[[User:Dbelton35|Dbelton35]] ([[User talk:Dbelton35|talk]]) 19:12, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
:{{ping|Dbelton35}} nope, I was being overzealous. Please feel free to re-add it. Thanks! [[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 19:20, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
 
== 20:56:21, 30 March 2017 review of submission by Batozsu89 ==
{{Lafc|username=Batozsu89|ts=20:56:21, 30 March 2017|declined=Draft:Protestant_church_in_Sajóvelezd}}
 
I would like to ask for some help how to improve my page ?What kind of references should I give?
 
{{ping|Batozsu89}} [[WP:RS|here]] is a good place to start. [[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 21:16, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
 
== 00:34:55, 31 March 2017 review of submission by Rickarm ==
{{Lafc|username=Rickarm|ts=00:34:55, 31 March 2017|declined=Draft:Mid-Atlantic_Innocence_Project}}
 
First, thank you for your review. I am a new contributor to Wikipedia so my apologies if I ask any stupid questions and am not submitting properly.
 
Do you have any specific examples from the article where it violates the policies you cited? That would be very helpful for me in making edits. I have looked at other Wikipedia articles done for Innocence Network affiliates and am trying to maintain a consistent organizational approach. Here is an example: [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/California_Innocence_Project|California_Innocence_Project]]
 
I appreciate your help!
--[[User:Rickarm|Rickarm]] ([[User talk:Rickarm|talk]]) 00:34, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
: {{ping|Rickarm}} I was on the fence on this one as after a quick read-through it sounded somewhat ad-like. After looking at it again I think your article is fine. Thanks, [[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 01:28, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
 
:: {{ping|ProgrammingGeek}} Much appreciated! Thanks for the quick response as well. Cheers! --[[User:Rickarm|Rickarm]] ([[User talk:Rickarm|talk]]) 04:06, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
 
== Mark Mercedes ==
 
You recently over ruled Dr Strauss and approved the creation of the article [[Mark Mercedes]] from draft form. Could you please explain the reason for this over rule? Dr Strauss made it clear that there were nowhere near enough third party sources and substantive mainstream media coverage. The consequent two edits from the 59 IP provided only provided a single article from a mainstream newspaper about Mercedes specifically about his retirement - an article that appears promotional and biased calling Mercedes a "pioneer" judging by the link (which is broken by the way). If he was a pioneer there would be a lot more coverage of this description and there isn't. [[Special:Contributions/101.182.34.93|101.182.34.93]] ([[User talk:101.182.34.93|talk]]) 08:59, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
: {{ping|101.182.34.93}} My rationale was that everything in the article is sourced and he passes [[WP:NWRESTLE]]. [[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 11:41, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
== Question ==
Hello [[User:ProgrammingGeek]] Thank you for the warm welcome :) May I ask if the edits I made regarding the prison name and month arrested were removed because I failed to cite them? If so sorry about that! I'll make sure I add the sources in the future! Thanks! [[User:SonWithOpenArms|SonWithOpenArms]] ([[User talk:SonWithOpenArms|talk]]) 05:11, 31 March 2017 (UTC) [[User:SonWithOpenArms]]
: that's all it was. Also, when linking to another page, make sure to use brackets ([) as opposed to braces ({). [[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 11:49, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
==re:==
"""Chinese history book claim Tang forces under Li Jingxing gained three victories over Silla forces in Maeso.In 675,Silla sent an envoy to offer Tang an apology and payed tribute to the Tang Dynasty again.Both Chinese and Korean sources mentioned this. According to this,Chinese sources seem to be the truth.About the strength of Tang forces,after the decisive Tibetan victory in the Battle of Dafei River in 670,Tang put most of its troops in the Western Front against the Tibetan Empire,so it was impossible for the Tang Dynasty to launch 300'000 troops against Silla.Korean sources about the strength of Tang forces probably be greatly exaggerated."""
:There is no source support for this content.--[[Special:Contributions/36.232.202.101|36.232.202.101]] ([[User talk:36.232.202.101|talk]]) 14:59, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
 
== Whittington Hospital ==
 
Why have you reverted my edits? [[Special:Contributions/2.25.221.186|2.25.221.186]] ([[User talk:2.25.221.186|talk]]) 17:23, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
 
== Requesting your review and Feedback ==
 
Hello ProgrammingGeek,
 
I recently wrote a Draft wiki page on the "Species Branding Hypothesis"...
 
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Species_Branding_Hypothesis
 
It deals with a hypothesis which could potentially solve an age old problem in Biology 'The species problem'...
 
I will be very thankful, if you could give me your review and Feedback...
 
Kind regards,
Joseph. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jayabalan.joseph|Jayabalan.joseph]] ([[User talk:Jayabalan.joseph#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jayabalan.joseph|contribs]]) 18:27, 2 April 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
{{Ping|Jayabalan.joseph}} as suggested on the page, request a review at [[WP:WikiProject Biology]]. I don't know anything about biology. [[User:ProgrammingGeek|'''<span style="color:Green">Programming</span><span style="color:Orange">Geek</span>''']][[User talk:ProgrammingGeek|<sup><span style="color:Green"> talk</span><span style="color:Orange">to</span>me</sup>]] 19:33, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
 
 
Can you pl suggest me whom I could contact... <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jayabalan.joseph|Jayabalan.joseph]] ([[User talk:Jayabalan.joseph#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jayabalan.joseph|contribs]]) 19:46, 2 April 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->