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===Proposed lede ===
'''Oracle Database''' (or simply 'Oracle') is an [[Enterprise software|enterprise-level]] [[database management system]] (DBMS) developed and marketed by [[Oracle Corporation]]. Version 2.3 in 1979 was the first commercially available [[relational database management system]] (RDBMS) incorporating the [[SQL]] Structured Query Language. The product has been continuously been developed to achieve [[high availability]], accelerated performance, data security, access security, data consistency that are required for enterprises with [[very large database]]s (VLDB) and with multiple users accessing the database. Oracle has been developed to incorporate [[multi-model database]] and [[Cloud computing]] features. <s>Oracle's latest generation product is known as the Oracle Autonomous Database, which was introduced at Oracle Open World in 2017<ref>https://www.forbes.com/sites/oracle/2017/10/02/larry-ellison-introduces-a-big-deal-the-oracle-autonomous-database/</ref>, including Oracle Autonomous Data Warehouse (ADW), and Oracle Autonomous Transaction Processing (ATP) database.</s>
<s>The Oracle database is used for Online Transaction Processing (OLTP), analytics, data warehousing (DW) and mixed (OLTP & DW) database workloads. While Oracle was originally designed for OLTP workloads, Oracle Version 7.1 (released in 1994) added the ability to also process Data Warehouse workloads by paralleling SQL queries. Individual Oracle databases can be devoted to either OLTP or DW workloads, or workloads can be combined into a single database. In addition, OLTP applications that include reporting capabilities can use the same Parallel Query feature normally used for Data Warehouses to generate those reports faster.</s>
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* I'm starting to understand the process. I am still apprehensive about editing your text directly, even in this work page. Maybe I will add some comments and let you incorporate those into the text as you see fit. [[User:Ccraft us|Ccraft us]] ([[User talk:Ccraft us|talk]]) 14:51, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
* Added 2nd paragraph in the lede outlining Oracle's support for OLTP workloads, DW workloads, and mixed OLTP/DW workloads. [[User:Ccraft us|Ccraft us]] ([[User talk:Ccraft us|talk]]) 20:40, 4 February 2019 (UTC)
* As written the first strike out is too promotional. The second paragraph strike out is also too detailed for the lede (even the remaining lede is too detailed). Don't worry editing my text on the workpage. Even the existing lede is too detailed. This is all my opinion, others opinion may be different.[[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 23:01, 4 February 2019 (UTC)
* A thought in passing. I again will comment on my views about what should be it in the lede. In my opinion It is needs to suitable for say a person in a call center or accounts who hears there system runs on an Oracle database and looks it up on Wikipedia. That means minimum technicality. It doesn't need to satisfy softies/technies as they are expected to read the index. What may be useful is a paragraph differential how Oracle Databases uses the term database in the sense MySQL and SQL Server use 'Server'; whilst those products use database in a sense somewhat akin to an Oracle Database Schema; this being a useful point to have in the lede.[[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 17:26, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
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== Article Body ==
===Major Capabilities of Oracle===
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