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<span class="wikied-assignment" style="font-size:85%;">— Assignment last updated by [[User:Sophiakalei|Sophiakalei]] ([[User talk:Sophiakalei|talk]]) 01:04, 13 September 2022 (UTC)</span>
== Peer Review ==
The article covers a broad range of topics falling under the umbrella of Pap smear. The photos of smear samples with descriptions below are helpful. The addition of gender-affirming care section is inclusive of people who may not identify as cis-gender women. The incorporation of statistics to corroborate effectiveness bolsters the informative nature of the article. The procedure section seem a bit jargon-heavy, so maybe reducing the amount of technical terms (or at least following up the use of technical terms with a brief explanation in few words) may be helpful. Lastly, it is uncertain how much value/benefit the "Experimental Techniques" section adds to the article, but overall a great update and revision of the previous article. [[User:Yslee22|Yslee22]] ([[User talk:Yslee22|talk]]) 17:37, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
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