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The article covers a broad range of topics falling under the umbrella of Pap smear. The photos of smear samples with descriptions below are helpful. The addition of gender-affirming care section is inclusive of people who may not identify as cis-gender women. The incorporation of statistics to corroborate effectiveness bolsters the informative nature of the article. The procedure section seem a bit jargon-heavy, so maybe reducing the amount of technical terms (or at least following up the use of technical terms with a brief explanation in few words) may be helpful. Lastly, it is uncertain how much value/benefit the "Experimental Techniques" section adds to the article, but overall a great update and revision of the previous article. [[User:Yslee22|Yslee22]] ([[User talk:Yslee22|talk]]) 17:37, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
== Wiki Education assignment: UCSF SOM Inquiry In Action-- Wikipedia Editing 2022 ==
The introduction to the page offers great insights and an overview of the subject matter without being too overbearing to the reader. Your team did a great job of balancing just how much information to provide in the introduction to keep readers fully informed. In doing so, it also creates a nice segue into the more detail-heavy sections later in the article. All the major details are also substantiated by articles, and so the References sections is very extensive, offering lots of outside sources for readers to reference. [[User:Ymesfin|Ymesfin]] ([[User talk:Ymesfin|talk]]) 01:26, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
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