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== 12:40, 18 September 2024 review of submission by 2A02:C7C:7720:7000:14FC:1CBA:85A9:3658 ==
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Hi
Please can I get some help with a draft submission that has been declined: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/[[Draft:Amy_BatemanAmy Bateman]]
 
This is the feedback: do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject
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Thanks
Natalie [[Special:Contributions/2A02:C7C:7720:7000:14FC:1CBA:85A9:3658|2A02:C7C:7720:7000:14FC:1CBA:85A9:3658]] ([[User talk:2A02:C7C:7720:7000:14FC:1CBA:85A9:3658|talk]]) 12:40, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
:I fixed your header, you had the words "advice on declined submission" where the draft title should go. The whole url is not needed so I removed that, too. Remember to log in when posting.
:Most of the awards do not contribute towards notability as the awards lack articles themselves(like [[Academy Award]] or [[Nobel Peace Prize]]), though Lakeland Book of the Year has one. You have references, but they are not in line next to the information they support, see [[WP:REFB|Referencing for beginners]]. You have desribed her curator work but not said what independent sources consider notable about it, how it was particularly important/significant/influential.
:If you are the creator of the draft, your username suggests you are connected to this person, what is the connection? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:48, 18 September 2024 (UTC)