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* "the high-spirited Catriona Potts". [[WP:POV]] wording.
* "talk Joan into her senses", "Catriona piques him", "elderly dame"? Weird, unidiomatic wording.
* "Torquil drats all"? What English dialect is that from?
[[User:Clarityfiend|Clarityfiend]] ([[User talk:Clarityfiend|talk]]) 07:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC) |