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{{AFC comment|1=Please fix the following: (1) The "Creator of Pony". ACM. reference is not formatted correctly. The title of the website is not "Creator of Pony". (2) "The result is he began development on Pony." This sentence can be removed, as it is implied. (3) "capabilities-secure" should likely have a wikilink. (4) "A few examples of idiomatic Pony follow" There is only one, also the "idiomatic" needs a citation or the word can just be removed. (5) "influenced" and "influenced by" are missing a citation. [[User:Caleb Stanford|Caleb Stanford]] ([[User talk:Caleb Stanford|talk]]) 06:23, 10 March 2025 (UTC)}}
{{AFC comment|1=I do believe that the topic is potentially notable. While it's mostly an academic language (with some not-so-well-cited papers), the paper "Deny capabilities for safe, fast actors" is quite well-cited. The developer is a real researcher at Microsoft Research, and the language has 5.8K stars on GitHub. The sources here are of mixed quality but there are some real ones.
However I think the article draft needs some work. What is "stop the world" in the lead? The references need a bit of cleanup. "Creator of Pony, Google Scholar" is not something to include as a reference. "Deny Capabilities for Safe, Fast Actors" is listed twice, once as a plain PDF. InfoQ sources probably OK. Can you fix these things and try again? [[User:Caleb Stanford|Caleb Stanford]] ([[User talk:Caleb Stanford|talk]]) 18:10, 8 March 2025 (UTC)}}
::Some parts of the critique seem opinionated. For instance, "stop the world" is a phrase from the references, used when referring to GCs, and originally placed into the lead by a previous editor. As this is still a draft, which has not been reviewed, it looks not to be a problem to correct errors, violations of rules, or grammar. When it comes to matters of opinion or aesthetics, however, that appears to be more problematic or something to have been addressed in talk.[[User:Wukuendo|Wukuendo]] ([[User talk:Wukuendo|talk]]) 16:00, 9 March 2025 (UTC)▼
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▲::Some parts of the critique seem opinionated. For instance, "stop the world" is a phrase from the references, used when referring to GCs, and originally placed into the lead by a previous editor. As this is still a draft, which has not been reviewed, it looks not to be a problem to correct errors, violations of rules, or grammar. When it comes to matters of opinion or aesthetics, however, that appears to be more problematic or something to have been addressed in talk.[[User:Wukuendo|Wukuendo]] ([[User talk:Wukuendo|talk]]) 16:00, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
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