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I hesitate to criticise, but "this" is duplicated. Also, is "just" needed? Thus far, I have found the page and exercises useful. Thanks. [[User:Finavon|Finavon]] ([[User talk:Finavon|talk]]) 20:11, 22 December 2007 (UTC)
:Please ''do'' criticise! Fixed. [[User:Tony1|<span style="color:darkgreen;">'''Tony'''</span>]] [[User_talk:Tony1|<span style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)</span>]] 01:53, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
 
== Example 3b ==
 
Nice work. Still, something seems to have been lost from Example 3b; I can't tell exactly what was intended. Only two of the errors are colored in the "where the issues are" section, and I'm not sure from the formatting of "the solution" exactly how it addresses the issues. I'm tempted to fix it myself, but I'm sure you already know what you intended, so I'll leave it for you.
 
There also seems to be some dangling test below example 4&mdash;another example or two in the making?--[[User:Atakdoug|atakdoug]] ([[User talk:Atakdoug|talk]]) 00:50, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
 
== Example 3a ==