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== Criticism of Article content and tone. ==
As an informative article, I feel the article's casual and possibly lecturing tone detriments from the value or emphasis of the article. In certain places, (e.g a quick Google search will turn up...) the information source is vaguely hinted at.
As such, the article fails to
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