Talk:Gaza Strip: Difference between revisions

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Heraclius, I see you've reverted the intro again. Would you mind discussing your reasons here? Many thanks, [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] ^{<font color="Purple">[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</font>} 20:28, July 13, 2005 (UTC)

:It's illogical to talk about Egypt capturing the Gaza strip in the second sentence of the article. The fact that the Gaza strip makes up part of the Palestinian territories should be stated first.[[User:Heraclius|Heraclius]] 20:34, 13 July 2005 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see your comment. I disagree about the flow. It's a controversial piece of land, and it makes sense to state up front how it's related to Egypt and Israel. The next paragraph deals with how it relates to both Israel and the Palestinian Authority. It makes the introduction disjointed and arguably POV to select one of those for the first paragraph. What does "sites of the areas" mean in the version you're reverting to? [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] ^{<font color="Purple">[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</font>} 21:52, July 13, 2005 (UTC)