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Line 56: The numbering of the phrases in the solution of example 3e is off. What happened to number five? — [[User:Bellhalla\|Bellhalla]] ([[User talk:Bellhalla\|talk]]) 12:57, 20 August 2008 (UTC) == First ''SR Merchant Navy Class'' excercise == In the first ''SR Merchant Navy Class'' excercise, I think we can remove more words. <blockquote> Incorporating <s>a number of</s> <s>new</s> developments in British steam locomotive technology, </blockquote> # ''a number of'' is unnecessary # ''new'' is redundant since a ''development'' is "a new and refined product or idea" What do you think? --[[User:Ke6jjj\|Ke6jjj]] ([[User talk:Ke6jjj\|talk]]) 03:55, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

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