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*[[User:Tony1/Advanced_editing_exercises#Wind power|Wind power]]

*[[User:Tony1/Advanced_editing_exercises#Wind power|SR Merchant Navy Class (2)]] [[User:Tony1|<font color="darkgreen">'''Tony'''</font >]] [[User talk:Tony1|<font color="darkgreen">(talk)</font >]] 11:11, 23 September 2009 (UTC)

::Thanks Tony.

::'''SR Merchant Navy Class (2)''': Yep, perfect, I think this is much safer.

::'''[[User:Tony1/Advanced_editing_exercises#Wind power|Wind power]]''': At the moment there are two solutions that are identical – I guess you meant to remove the second. It still sounds a little odd to me: I'd have thought three blades '''''is''''' a design, not three blades '''''are''''' a design. But of course "three blades" has to be treated as plural in the first part. I'm no grammar expert so I'll defer to your judgment here. One more alternative: ''The most common design for modern windmills is a three-blade turbine, which minimises forces related to material fatigue.'' [[User:Adrian J. Hunter|Adrian&nbsp;'''J.'''&nbsp;Hunter]]^{([[User talk:Adrian J. Hunter|talk]]•[[Special:contributions/Adrian J. Hunter|contribs]])} 12:02, 23 September 2009 (UTC)