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Sorry! Will draft the complete article offline first. The article is in desperate need of revision. It contains inaccuracies, blatant advertising (Rosetta Stone) and is not a reflection of the current state of CALL. [[User:GroovyGuzi|GroovyGuzi]] <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 08:47, 26 November 2010 (UTC).</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
Looking at the individual sections once again, I think it is possible to correct them and tidy them up one by one, without making a mess of the article as a whole. I'll make a few changes today, starting with the Introduction and History sections. The Introduction is poorly written and needs simplifying. I think that the section on problems and
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