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::::As indicated by the dead link flag, the source has changed. [https://secure.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/w/index.php?title=Pap_test&diff=443671265&oldid=442266912 this edit fixed the dead link] However the source no longer supports this item.
::::In looking back through the [http://web.archive.org/web/20080410201813/http://www.cancer.org/docroot/CRI/content/CRI_2_4_2X_Can_cervical_cancer_be_prevented_8.asp? wayback archive for the page in question ] I have not yet found the version that did support the item. As such I have added a note indicating that additional/fresh citation would be helpful. [[User:Zodon|Zodon]] ([[User talk:Zodon|talk]]) 22:51, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
::::I have made an additional suggested change to the sentence in question, changing it from "Most women contract HPV soon after becoming sexually active" to "Most women who contract HPV do so soon after becoming sexually active." (Basically another phrasing of 2 above.) In this context this is the important observation. I hope that clarifies the matter.
::::Sorry if my edits were confusing or appeared to not acknowledge the discussion here, we were evidently both editing at once. I was in the middle of composing this response and it took longer than I expected. [[User:Zodon|Zodon]] ([[User talk:Zodon|talk]]) 23:06, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
== painful smear tests ==
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