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==Short examples III==

===Exercise 12: Ms Ima Hogg ===

Ms Ima Hogg; yesYes, parents can be cruel.

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*<font color=darkgreen>'''"Already"'''</font> is redundant in the light of the past tense (unless it's required for some particular emphasis, which was not the case in this context).

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===Exercise 13===