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Line 36: :[http://liquidmesh3d.com/animation.html http://liquidmesh3d.com/animation.html] (#61) So far prose looks pretty good. No quick spot-check issues. :* Hooray! Please update the descriptions of [[:File:Duke Nukem Screenshot2.jpg]] and [[:File:Dukenukemforever2007.jpg]] to explain why it's necessary for the reader to see these. The captions should also be updated with similar information. In other words, why are we showing these images to the reader? : Do those work? [http://www.shacknews.com/docs/press/20090518_dnf_3dr_.x http://www.shacknews.com/docs/press/20090518_dnf_3dr_.x] is dead. Can you see if the URL has been adjusted by ShackNews or if it can be replaced? If [[Meqon]] is relatively unknown why does it need to be linked? (it's a redlink) :* Very astute. Whole numbers under 10 should be spelled out as words, except when in lists, tables or infoboxes ([[WP:NUMERAL]]). I found one, but there may be others. : As far as my Edit > Find searches are showing, that was the only one. *Inline citations belong immediately after punctuation marks ([[WP:CITEFOOT]]). I know there's at least one in the '''Gearbox revival and release, 2010–2011''' section

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