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:: I removed two paragraphs from that section. The remainder may still need a bit of work but I don't have an opinion of how to improve it. [[User:Skippydo|Skippydo]] ([[User talk:Skippydo|talk]]) 22:32, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
:::I rewrote the motivation. Is that better? --[[User:RobinK|Robin]] ([[User talk:RobinK|talk]]) 03:01, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
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