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==Group 1==

===Teen pop idol ===

He was a teen pop idol from 1964–1979, and since then he hashad forged a career as an adult contemporary singer.

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*The second "he" can be removed through [[Ellipsis (linguistics)|ellipsis]]—that is, it's at the very start and the reader will silently carry it over into the second clause if it's removed; oddly enough, this ''helps'' the cohesion of the text by forcing the reader to psychologically bind together the two clauses.

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===Canadian politics ===