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*the use of weasel words and unclear quotation - called greatest game by whom? rephrase to be active/ considered by many.....make clear
*3 paragraph lead
*trim down plot, other sections that are growing for no reason
*expand reception section, only one paragraph, what did japanese reviewers think
*find back issues of independent game magazines from 1991, and whether critics' views of the unchanged aspects of the game (characters, story) have changed over 15 years. I stress "independent" because I wouldn't trust, say, Nintendo Power to give an objective review of Final Fantasy II, although such a source might provide insight on how the game was marketed.
*"Development" section expansion. Influences? "Graphical Improvements" more technical stuff, memory on the cartidge versus other SNES games
*get some primary sources, replace bahamut reference
*including reviews and opinions of the sound track alone. influences?
*What was different between Wonderswan color version and others?
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