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I'll take this on in the next few days. [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]<sup>x</sup>[[User talk:Jamesx12345|12345]] 22:19, 26 February 2014 (UTC)
*Intro seems a bit verbose. Perhaps another picture of the Grasshopper - to illustrate the concept of a rocket landing - would help?
*"occur at a velocity of approximately" - km/s would be adequate here, I think.
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