Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1: Difference between revisions
Content deleted Content added
Jamesx12345 (talk | contribs) + |
→GA Review: fixed an instance of missing time context |
||
Line 19:
***If there is a local consensus to have it one way, I see no problem with that. [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]<sup>x</sup>[[User talk:Jamesx12345|12345]] 21:42, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
*"It said this was an approximation." - this single sentence looks a bit odd. It also makes the use of refs 6 and 7 a bit unclear.
**{{
*I've tagged 4 dead links using Checklinks. There's also a {{cn}} needing fixed, but that might be covered by ref 46.
*"first stage is now being flight tested" - very liable to dating. Given that you and some other editors have focused on this article for a fair length of time, it should be OK, but an {{tl|As of}} or {{tl|Update after}} could be used.
**{{Fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 22:26, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
*"News of the new test rocket" - "News of the test rocket"
*"re-entry database" - not sure what this is. From the context, it seems to be data that will allow a computer to work out where it will land, but I could be quite far off the mark.
| |||