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*The bullet points in '''Test program''' are also inconsistent re. full stops.
*"tests of post-mission (spent) Falcon 9 booster stages" - that link is a bit confusing. I think that whole bullet could be made somewhat clearer, perhaps by starting with "September 2013..."
*"Grasshopper is a set of experimental technology-demonstrator..." - the two refs in that paragraph not at the end of the sentences - currently 33 and 34 - could be moved to the end.
*"...flight tests of the vehicle are to occur in Texas." - ref needed.
*"...and did so." - this is quite abrupt, and also needs a ref. I can't help but feel that there is a nicer way to say it.
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