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"Similar to traditional program design, community-based program design often utilizes a range of tools and models which are meant to enhance the efficacy and outcomes of the program’s design. The difference between traditional design and community-based design, when using these tools, are the dynamics in the relationship between the designers, it's participants, and the community as a whole."
 
::''Hey ya'll, I copy and pasted the above blurb from your "Socio-Ecological Model" section. I would suggest incorporating it into the introduction, as it is general and descriptive enough to give readers a quick idea of community-based program design and how it differs from other forms of program design.'' --[[User:Ubuntu713|Ubuntu713]] ([[User talk:Ubuntu713|talk]]) 23:49, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
 
::''Additionally, the introductory definition of community-based program design seems a bit clunky and utilizes unaccessible language that is not linked to other wikipedia pages. Maybe try looking for and using a more succinct definition.''--[[User:Ubuntu713|Ubuntu713]] ([[User talk:Ubuntu713|talk]]) 00:01, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
 
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