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Line 70: The Earth's atmosphere has no definite boundary, slowly becoming thinner and fading into outer space. Three-quarters of the atmosphere's mass, however, is contained within the first 11 km of the planet's surface. Emus have brown to grey-brown plumage of shaggy appearance; the shafts and the tips of the [[feather]]s are black. (Compare with a statement about a different part of the body, which might have a full-stop.) Solar radiation is absorbed by the tips, ~~and~~WHILE the loose-packed inner [[plumage]] insulates the skin. ===Exercise 4: commas===

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