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:::Thanks for the explanation. I've had a look at the lead and made some NPOV improvements there. I will try to review more of the draft when I get a chance. Though, as you say, it is difficult to compare your draft with the current article, based on a quick skim, your draft does appear to be an improvement over the existing article and so I would support replacing the existing article and doing further improvements to your draft in mainspace. ~[[User:Kvng|Kvng]] ([[User talk:Kvng|talk]]) 02:38, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
::::Thanks {{ping|Kvng}}. I made a few more edits to the Lede and uploaded all the freely licensed images after having just received a Declaration of Consent from the copyright holder (Juniper). Currently WP:COI requires that I request a disinterested editor merge my draft into article-space, rather than do so myself, so I have submitted a Request Edit. Was wondering if you would like to do the honors? Or should we wait to hear back from {{ping|SamWilson989}}. Sam said he would take a look and may want to review it prior to it being in article-space. [[User:CorporateM|CorporateM]] ([[User_talk:CorporateM|Talk]]) 21:22, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
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