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<b><font color=green>HINT</font><br/>Gregorian chant is the best-known repertory of plainchant, a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred so<font color=crimson>ng, which</font> was developed in the Catholic Church, mainly in <br/>western and central Europe during the period 800–1000, with later additions and redactions.▼
*A good ___location for a break is about half-way through (<font color=crimson>red</font>).
*You ''could'' start your new, second sentence with “This ...”.
*However, being singular, “this” could refer back to any of the four singular items in the first sentence: “Gregorian chant”, “best-known repertory”, “plainchant”, or “a form of monophonic, unaccompanied sacred song”. That would be very fuzzy.
*To make it clear, you’ll need to restate one of these items at the start of your new sentence.
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<b><font color=green>HINT</font><br/>However, ardent debate between political factions known as the Federalists and <br/>anti-Federalists ensued over the balance between strengthening the nation’s <br/>government and weakening the rights of the <font color=crimson>people who</font> just 10 years earlier had <br/>rebelled against the perceived tyranny of George III of England, particularly his <br/>unwillingness to change the taxation regime.▼
*Here, again, you’ll need to tweak the grammar and repeat an item in the new sentence, preferably not straight after the previous occurrence.
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<b><font color=green>HINT</font><br/>As such, the comic strip holds a unique place in British football folklor<font color=crimson>e, d</font>emonstrated <br/>most clearly by the phrase “real Roy of the Rovers stuff”, which is commonly used <br/>by football writers and commentators in describing displays of great skill or results <br/>that go against the odd<font color=crimson>s, as</font> a reference to the dramatic storylines that became <br/>the trademark of the comic strip.▼
*This is long enough to split into three sections.
*Where one clause flows very smoothly to the next, you might use a semicolon instead of a full-stop; however, two semicolons in a row is uncommon.
*One of the clauses might stand nicely as a short sentence, for emphasis.
*Consider using back-references such as “it” or “this” instead of repeating previous items.
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AFTER THIS, IT’S STILL UNDER CONSTRUCTION!
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