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Either word order is possible, but I think the existing one is the easiest. (Otherwise, there might be an undesirable juxtaposition of "the people" and "the factions".)

I like the dramatic pause of the em dash (and I'm an em-dash guy, as you know), and it's a good solution. But I wanted an example in which they observe a straight repetition "the people. The people" avoided. I need to make it clear in the hint that this is only one solution.

'''Question C'''