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my 4 cents re: editing hermeneutics
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Exercise two: re Tony
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Thanks, Span. [[User:Tony1|Tony]] 03:07, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
 
:Question A: Ah, that makes sense; I hadn't considered Italy. Question B: Yes, that's the loss of meaning that I'm talking about; sorry I didn't make that more clear. Using "same" solves the problem. Explain what you mean though by juxtaposition of factions and people (they seem far apart to me):
::However, ardent debate ensued between political factions known as the Federalists and anti-Federalists over the balance between strengthening the nation’s government and weakening the rights of the people.
:Or does that just open a new can of worms by separating the verb from "over"? "Ensue" here has two prepositions, so it can't be next to both, and I guess I just like seeing the verb earlier in the sentence. Not a big deal though. Question C: Cool =). --[[User:Spangineer|Spangineer]]<sup>[[:es:Usuario:Spangineer|es]]</sup>&nbsp;<small><font color="brown">[[User talk:Spangineer|(háblame)]]</font></small> 13:07, 4 August 2006 (UTC)