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{{AFC comment|1=What is the intended title of this draft article? Is it '''robotic crawlers''', or what? Please clarify, and if necessary revise the [[WP:LEDE|lede sentence]] appropriately? [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 22:43, 9 May 2016 (UTC)}}
:Thanks for your quick review! I've edited the introduction to the article. The point of the article is '''Robotic Non-Destructive Testing (NDT)''' – I have too much information to simply append to the existing articles about [[Pigging#Intelligent_pigging|Pigging]] or [[non-destructive testing]], and it seems to me that it's narrow enough to be outside the scope of [[robotics]]/[[Remotely_operated_underwater_vehicle|ROVs]]/[[Remote_control_vehicle|remote-control vehicles]]. Please let me know if my edits are sufficient, and please edit the title to Robotic Non-Destructive Testing (NDT), as I can't seem to change the title now. [[User:Koz5000|Koz5000]] ([[User talk:Koz5000|talk]]) 15:56, 10 May 2016 (UTC)
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