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===Proposed lede ===
'''Oracle Database''' (commonly referred to as '''Oracle DBMS''' or simply '''Oracle''') is a [[database]] management system developed and marketed by [[Oracle Corporation]]. Originally developed as a relational database management system (RDBMS), Oracle has been progressively enhanced to support a wide range of data modeling techniques and data types making it a [[multi-model database]] platform<ref>{{Cite web |url=http://download.oracle.com/otndocs/products/spatial/pdf/12c/Multimodel_Database_with_Oracle_Database_12c_Release_2.pdf |title=Multimodel Database with Oracle Database 12c Release 2 |access-date=1 March 2017}}</ref>. The Oracle database includes a wide array of features to access and manage data, accelerate performance, achieve high-availability, provide security, maintain data consistency, and scale throughput
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* Suggest we try editting the lede above to an improved version. If you are participating here be aware you maynot get attribution for your suggestions in the final article,[[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 08:42, 31 January 2019 (UTC)
* I am probably sounding too much like a marketing person with use of the word "popular" ( [[User:Ccraft us|Ccraft us]] ); Does the market share reference even belong in the lead? ( [[User:Ccraft us|Ccraft us]] )
:* I think it's best to stay out the market share thing ... it applies actually only at a specific date (and it may even be SQL Server now has a bigger impact now being available on linux?). I removed the marrked share line. [[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 23:12, 31 January 2019 (UTC)
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