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===Proposed lede ===

'''Oracle Database''' (or simply 'Oracle') is an [[Enterprise software|enterprise-level]] [[database management system]] (DBMS) developed and marketed by [[Oracle Corporation]]. Originally developedVersion as2.3 ain 1979 was the first commercially available [[relational database management system]] (RDBMS), Oracleincorporating the [[SQL]] Structured Query Language. The product has been progressivelycontinuously enhancedbeen developed to supportachieve a[[high wideavailability]], rangeaccelerated ofperformance, data modelingsecurity, techniquesaccess andsecurity, data typesconsistency makingthat itare arequired for enterprises with [[multi-modelvery large database]]s platform.(VLDB) and Thewith Oraclemultiple databaseusers includesaccessing athe widedatabase. array ofOracle featureshas tobeen accessdeveloped andto manage data, accelerate performance, achieveincorporate high[[multi-availability,model provide security, maintain data consistency,database]] and scale[[Cloud throughputcomputing]] features.

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:* I think it's best to stay out the market share thing ... it applies actually only at a specific date (and it may even be SQL Server now has a bigger impact now being available on linux?). I removed the marrked share line. [[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 23:12, 31 January 2019 (UTC)

* Cutting out the multi-model reference. The lede is generally not meant to have references but should be supported by the article body which should have the references. To be totally strict the multi-model claim needs to be supported by an independent source.

* I am thinking of a neat way of trying to say where people say 'Oracle' or 'Oracle DBMS' they are usually referring to this product, despite the fact Oracle also has stewardship of over 5 other databases! I've gone back to saying Simply Oracle.[[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 2300:3302, 311 JanuaryFebruary 2019 (UTC)

* I've tried a rewrite .. this cures some things and introduces others.[[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 00:02, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

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