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Upon posting the previous talk post, I have realized that my first post here has been deleted. I would like to provide some context and summarise what it was about. In my initial post a month ago, I explained that I was going to be editing this wiki stub article over the course of the month, and welcomed any changes or recommendations to be posted to my talk page or under the article's talk page. As this is a part of my university assessment, I will be wrapping up my contributions by this week's end. [[User:Teenytinyhooman|Teenytinyhooman]] ([[User talk:Teenytinyhooman|talk]]) 03:18, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
== Suggestion - Removing a previous citation + contribution updates ==
Some updates: I've added a few sections to the wiki stub, and re-phrased some previous text. Also, I'm considering removing the first citation that redirects users to the 'Andrew File System Retirement' - I believe it was initially intended to redirect to an article or paper that is now unavailable on the website. I am currently looking for other websites where the original article can be found and if I've succeeded, I will add it back into the wiki article.
Additionally, two more sections are yet to be added by me: the 'Criticisms' and the 'Propositions' section. I am considering making a graphic to illustrate the propositions or the model, but I believe the one created by the previous contributor sums up the model perfectly. My contributions are done, I am just making a few final touches, and will update here once I've finished contributing to the article.
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