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== CCTP 752 - Peer Review- Fall 2022 ==

The page is well developed and the structure is organized in a clear manner. The content is rich and it covers most of the elements needed to understand this theory. Nevertheless, there is room for improvement in many sections. I will mention three urgent improvements that could be implemented to elevate the quality of the article and boost its nature as a Wikipedia page. First, the introduction at the beginning of the article lacks some links to other Wikipedia sites. There are important keywords in the introduction without links, such as integration, problematic, cognitive… etc. Second, the theory application section, which is called in the article as “Current Usage” could be significantly improved. This section could be presented in sections by category; Health, Organizational Communication, Internal Bureaucracy…etc. Then under each category comes explanation with some practical examples. Third, there are no visual images to explain the different elements of the theory. Adding some visuals to “The concepts” and the “Assumptions” sections could improve the quality of the article significantly. [[User:CD1074|CD1074]] ([[User talk:CD1074|talk]]) 10:40, 12 October 2022 (UTC)