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{{ping|MB}} I do not understand what you mean by "simpler version" here: [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Help:Unreviewed_new_page&diff=1120531657&oldid=1120530528]. My edit consisted purely of copyedits and the two of brief additions noted in the edit summary. What parts did you object to? – [[User:Joe Roe|Joe]] <small>([[User talk:Joe Roe|talk]])</small> 15:06, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
:That wasn't a copy-edit, it was a rewrite in you own style because you didn't like the original. Also there was almost as much blue in your version as black. That doesn't help a reader. It just distracts them if they think they have to click on the links. All the links they need are in the sections below. It's a simple didactic process. [[User:Kudpung|Kudpung กุดผึ้ง]] ([[User talk:Kudpung|talk]]) 15:21, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
::For starters, in the very first sentence you change "New articles" to "All new articles". "All" adds nothing of value, it is just wordiness that makes the page longer. Then you changed "articles" to "articles and redirect". This page is about articles. It is irrelevant that redirects are also reviewed. A new user who is writing their first article probably doesn't know what a redirect is. More distracting clutter. [[User:MB|<b style="color:#034503">MB</b>]] 15:28, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
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