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== Close paraphrase and source issues ==
*This edit [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Welsh_devolution&diff=1149064489&oldid=1148887661&diffmode=source] introduces text that is a very close (probably too close) paraphrase of the source: {{tq|In this period, there was neither a Welsh Office (created in 1964) nor any devolution for Wales. A total of 125 local authorities opposed the scheme and 27 of 36 Welsh MPs voted against the second reading of the bill (Cunningham 2007).}} It is, however, good to see reliable academic sources replacing one of the newspapers in the sourcing here.
*In the same edit, the Davies citation only mentions Plaid Cymru because that is the focus of his discussion and not Tryweryn, so consideration should be given as to whether it is due in the text here.
*I also notice in the paragraphs above that text appears to have been copied from elsewhere without adaption, so that there are various Davies ''op cit.'' references (I think 5 of them) but Davies has not been previously cited. [[User:Sirfurboy|Sirfurboy🏄]] ([[User talk:Sirfurboy|talk]]) 07:38, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
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