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::**The other general comments are really also about prose which I am leaving for now.
::I think if this is a serious candidate for a good article, it needs a lot of work still. [[User:Sirfurboy|Sirfurboy🏄]] ([[User talk:Sirfurboy|talk]]) 10:15, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
:::Thanks for these comments, much appreciated.
:::* I've removed all but one of the citations from the lead (all but two citations in the lead were essentially already mentioned in the body).
:::*Images point there seems to have since been addressed.
:::*I've changed party support bullet points into sentences.
:::*NationCymru is regulated by [[Independent Press Standards Organisation]] like many large news article producers. It is often the only news organisation that reports on certain Welsh matters. I could swap in other news articles instead so that Nation.Cymru is used less?
:::*Neutrality: The body of the text looks neutral. Perhaps an addition concerning criticism of devolution perhaps?
:::*Changing references to SFN: I'd be happy to move to SFN but perhaps you would be able to turn your hand to that more easily than myself as it's not a format I'm particularly experienced at using. I'm not sure that everything would be covered without the use of some news articles?
:::Thanks again [[User:Titus Gold|Titus Gold]] ([[User talk:Titus Gold|talk]]) 16:42, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
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